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Published: 2005-01-28 19:41:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 161; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description I called all week, not once did you answer
You called me stupid, you called me a prancer
All i wanted was to talk
remove the breeze blocks, cut the lock

You wouldn't go out in the cold to listen
Now im on my own and i watch the blood glisten
It runs down my arm and onto the bed
You say i'm all talk, but soon ill be dead

You wern't there when i needed you
dont give me that shit, "but i have stuff to do"
So i write this now as i fill with tears
wondering what happened to all those wasted years

So my darling friend this is something i have to do
I love you so much, this cut is for you
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Comments: 17

imasexysheep [2005-05-19 00:59:05 +0000 UTC]

thats an amazing poem. i really love it

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simplisticaims In reply to imasexysheep [2005-05-19 12:40:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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sofieea [2005-02-23 12:39:59 +0000 UTC]

U really are brilliant!!! It reminds we of how I used to feel... Y have not u written more poems???

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sofieea In reply to sofieea [2005-02-23 22:58:17 +0000 UTC]

u should....I wish I could convey such strong feelings as well as u
luv u...

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sofieea In reply to sofieea [2005-02-23 22:53:22 +0000 UTC]

u should...it's very emotional

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simplisticaims In reply to sofieea [2005-02-23 21:28:50 +0000 UTC]

i dont know...i have written alot more...i carry a little book to write in when i get stressed...but none of it is ever put on dA...maybe i should.....xx

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running-in-shadows [2005-02-13 20:56:06 +0000 UTC]

I dont no why i didnt fav this earlier i thought i did but i love it. catx x x

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starsamuraigirl [2005-01-29 12:56:24 +0000 UTC]

wow, beautiful! I know the feeling!

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simplisticaims In reply to starsamuraigirl [2005-01-29 19:05:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Im always glad when someone can relate to something i do.

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starsamuraigirl In reply to simplisticaims [2005-01-29 19:54:54 +0000 UTC]

well you're welcome! and i am glad when i can relate to stuff cuz sumtimes it helps you to understand the poem or art piece!

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running-in-shadows [2005-01-28 21:20:29 +0000 UTC]

i love it, i hope the world turns to shine for u. you know im always hear if u need to talk. catx x x

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simplisticaims In reply to running-in-shadows [2005-01-29 10:23:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! i really apprechiate that

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Murasicht [2005-01-28 19:50:58 +0000 UTC]

what an enigma..

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simplisticaims In reply to Murasicht [2005-01-28 20:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man

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IvyLee [2005-01-28 19:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh, hang in there hun. I liked it a lot, if that makes you feel any better

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simplisticaims In reply to IvyLee [2005-01-28 19:55:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you its my first attempt at writing.....apprechiate the comment alot.

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IvyLee In reply to simplisticaims [2005-01-28 20:05:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeppers anytime....hey check out some of mine!

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