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SimulatedExistance — Understanding from the Inside
Published: 2005-06-04 15:23:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 236; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 13
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We shall never reach that Utopian society,to where one would know as much,
as two on the left, three on the right.
But an ignorant Terrene we propogate,
tantalizing amounts of defilement and benightedness.
And here I stand alone,
a beautiful mind,
thirsting for knowledge, to reach the cosmos.
Yet everything is in our head,
how are we to know it is real?
Where is the divide,
between the real and the fabricated?
I do not think it matters.
But then, who are we,
in this Simulated Existance.
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Comments: 31
Why oh why haven't I read thi sooner? You inspire me to write more poems, to find deeper ways of expressing myself... You, Simulated Existance, are the one who put words in my mouth.
And, just for the record, it made me think of Cowboy Bebop the Movie, when Vincent looks out the window and says;
"Who can draw the line of insanity? Are there not those who crosses and recrosses the line? No, I'm not insane; the rest of the world is..."
That's how good your poem is.
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Now I'm happy... :S Just saw something that tore me appart (since I know I'll never be that good), and then here you come! WHEEEEEE!!
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Aye as expected I arrived.
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*atacking you and giving you a kind of hug they'd never be able to make an emotion of*
and then
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No problem. 
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And if you didn't see the hidden message there, I'll have to teach your brain to be as terrible as I am in pervert-thinking.
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Oh, I saw it...
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Good, good. 
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Of course I am.
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You make me ponder the truth that lies within your poem. Deep but with essence. Great piece!
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Heh nice double post. I'm not overly satisfied with it, but it's like my signiture piece. By the way thanks for the fav, the watch, and the comments lol.
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You make me ponder the truth that lies within your poem. Deep but with essence. Great piece!
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Ah. Derived from your name, I see. I have totally had days like those. None of this makes any sense, and even if it does, where do I fit into it. Nothing is ever really going to matter in the end...nice words though. The imagery is fantastic.
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I kinda made it in a rush, pretty much a few days after I made my account. My friend was all "you should write poetry again". I just shrugged and said fine. Anyway my lstory isn't needed, so thanks lol.
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It's rather good indeed. Gives me a picture of a bleak future, with everyone unhappy, and looking for an alternative to... existance perhaps?
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Maybe there is an eleven dimension universe, maybe not. I personally believe there is an infinetly expanding number of parallel universes, one opening for every different choice we make.
I like this, and pertaining to the first comment, did you create your user name as such after you wrote this poem?
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Well when I say eleven dimensions I mean like more than the four we know of now (time, X, Y, Z). But there is an extra seven spacial dimensions in which M-theorists have concluded that certain particals, such as maybe gravitons, can slip away into those extra seven.
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Nah not really. Just more like most people don't realize how stupid they really are and how ignorant they act. I believe in a 11 dimension universe with a possible multiverse.
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ime assuming this is based upon certain theories pertaining to the universe and matter itself, being just a three dimensional hologram?
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Ya I know it seems all matrixy like. Definitly didn't want that to happen...
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nice way to tie your name in...
Free your mind man, your in the matrix hahaha
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