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Hope:10/09/2011
When all I had was dark
(despair pain gloom hurt),
you gave me that which is light
(hope love smiles happiness).
But don't give me roses
(white red pink yellow)
when you can't help me keep them.
When the roses
aren't given love and affection,
they wither.
I need you as the roses do.
Don't let the darkness
choke me out,
Sunshine.
You are my hope,
the only hope for me,
for now.
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Comments: 11
adarkworldfantasy [2011-10-11 01:53:14 +0000 UTC]
This fits Vincent so very well Nice work dear
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SinsofMidnight In reply to adarkworldfantasy [2011-10-12 05:55:54 +0000 UTC]
It also fits a lot of relationships, including my almost one ^^
I'm glad you like it and find it befiting of Vincent, though!
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Phoneix-Faerie [2011-10-10 23:14:56 +0000 UTC]
i think this works well, and the ending is oddly optimistic i think
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SinsofMidnight In reply to Phoneix-Faerie [2011-10-11 00:43:39 +0000 UTC]
I intended the whole piece to be a bit optimistic... Why is it oddly optimistic...?
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Phoneix-Faerie In reply to SinsofMidnight [2011-10-11 22:55:59 +0000 UTC]
just because it begins so sadly
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SinsofMidnight In reply to Phoneix-Faerie [2011-10-12 00:53:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I see... For some reason, I didn't perceive that as sad, lol
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SinsofMidnight In reply to Phoneix-Faerie [2011-10-13 02:46:53 +0000 UTC]
My perception is screwy, lol
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