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Published: 2011-09-22 14:36:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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PaNIc:8/20/2011
Strangulation
of the stress,
the rush,
the need,
the pull.
I can't resist.
Pressure
increases.
I
can't
breathe!
Short
sharp
breaths,
panting
hash
uneven.
Save me
from me.
Broken
pattern
gains back
normalcy.
Slow-
-ly
ve-
-ry
slow-
-ly.
Regulate my breathing,
the deeps pulls
of breath
I hold
as long as I can.
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Comments: 11
Bless...panic attacks are AWFUL things...
WELL DONE.
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I do agree on panic attacks...
Thank you
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So familiar, and so perfectly captured and expressed. Thank you.
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Sad it's familiar, glad you like it
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I love the formatting, short broken lines only one or two words long, it feels like hyperventilation, well done.
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It does feel that way? That's what happens when I panic, so I associate it ^^ It's the feel I was trying to get
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Oh yes, the way that it reads, that how it feels when I have a panic attack, it certainly came across.
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this really captures the panic and the emotion of this well I like the form of it
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I tried to use the form to give you the broken, strange feeling a panic attack can induce...
I'm glad that it gets through to you when you read it...
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