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Description Despite this, her toes hovered less than an inch away. The light shined off the cell phone, only increasing her frustration more.



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Picture illustration for the story "The misunderstanding with Tiffany", by .

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Comments: 10

EuphoricCreations [2008-10-24 23:24:44 +0000 UTC]

use the flip flop yo o_o

anyway great set jerry, her outfit is very modern californiaesque, i really like the floor and wall patterns but about that pole pattern, i'm just not feeling it, what i think you need is a nice little pattern you can wrap around the pole and repeat vertically, in fact, i made one just now, [link] here ya go my friend.

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SirJerryLone In reply to EuphoricCreations [2008-10-25 04:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the praise, my friend.

As for the criticism, I think it's correct. Actually I didn't pay great attention to the pole, apart that it was green as specified in the story.
On the other hand I'm not sure that your texture would work properly. If I'm not wrong, that texture is a multi-gradient between black and white, that should give the effect of the light reflection against the metallic pole. Since the texture is "fixed", it isn't the optimal choice in a 3D picture, where the light changes with the view angles. What I should have done (and I didn't) is to spend some time to experiment with the reflections parameters of the pole surface.
Anyway, I agree that the texture I chose is far from perfect.

Thanks.

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reacherfan [2008-10-16 13:41:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh how she struggles with all her might - it's really too bad her trusty cell phone is JUST barely beyond her toes grasp.

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SirJerryLone In reply to reacherfan [2008-10-16 14:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, too bad!
I wonder who is the darn bastard that put the cell phone exactly there!

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reacherfan In reply to SirJerryLone [2008-10-16 14:11:07 +0000 UTC]

I don't know - but whoever it was, they were quite smart From her perspective, the cell phone appears to be right there, ripe for the taking. She's had it in her grasp so many times before (including in the first picture). But now, when she truly needs it, it escapes her, mocking her from just beyond her struggling toes

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SirJerryLone In reply to reacherfan [2008-10-16 14:30:02 +0000 UTC]

Eh eh. One of the advantages of 3D is that you can calculate distances with incredible precision - even the maximum extension of a toe!

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reacherfan In reply to SirJerryLone [2008-10-16 15:40:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's pretty neat I try to be precise in my stories, so that the reader knows just how close the helpless heroine is to her freedom. I'm so glad you were able to take those words and bring them to life

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SirJerryLone In reply to reacherfan [2008-10-16 15:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Half life. For the full life, we're waiting for UncleM.

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DLShowtime [2008-10-16 03:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Stretch those tootsies!

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SirJerryLone In reply to DLShowtime [2008-10-16 10:57:40 +0000 UTC]

It's what she's trying to do with all her might, poor her!

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