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Published: 2006-03-03 16:22:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 444; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 64
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critiques welcome! i'd like to hear how to improve this.. im kinda out of ideas hahaRelated content
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how did u come up with the idea?? its really cool
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I really liked the one to the right..
It should have had a background though. A faded pattern or something..
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get rid of the pink dude! thats just what i think, also did you think about inverting it just to see what it'll look like. oh ya..... whats with the "muse" in the top left corner?
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first suggestion, remove the maroon, it nixes the color scheme, and makes me queazy.
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i like the concept, however one critique is that i think u should stick to one style..either vectors or the caligraphy/fantasy like. specifically im talking about the butterflies and the text in caligraphy. it just seems to clash with the rest of the piece. other than that, it's great!
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i will def. keep that in mind! thx for the critique.. i hate it when people just say 'neat' haha, but ya.. i get what your saying tho, i'll see what i can do!
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totally hate the 'omg..so amazing' its so shallow! i expect real critique.. i mean that's y i show my work..to find out what to change, not brag about how amazing i am
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D: you depress me with your uber tallents of design >E
I like the choice of colors, very vibrant and they stand out against the brown box and black designs. You could maybe put the wings behind the two front flaps of the box 'cause I can see the feathers overlapping them and it shows that she was cut out and stuck on the box rather than comming out. The splatter is cool, the wall is cool, the thick lines behind her are kinda thick and destracting but it flows into the text very well.. hmm.. harhar.. I'm so jealous X3
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pretty cool 
maybe you could try and make it more look like her coming out of the box rather than the box hitting the ground kind of hard with her being stuck inside? or maybe I just got the message wrong and that was exactly the way you wanted it to look 
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that's very cool :fav: but it looks a bit strange how she disapiers in the box
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