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BLEH!
That's how I feel about these 2 pages. I just want to fill this with BLEEEEEH! But anyways...

Woot, first two pages of my audition. Huzzah! Traditionally! Hurray! And non-strait lines! Yay!
I must say, it's a very rough start. It gets better (I hope). Good thing the judges have to read the whole audition. I made A LOT of mistakes in the drawing and shading. I originally was going to have the 2nd page as the first page, but I realized that would be a HORRIBLE and REALLY obnoxious way to start it, so I put the flash back part in front of it.... Gosh that is one horribly drawn foot there....

But please give me your thoughts about it, I need as much help to just get through to the first round. Oh, and also, any ideas for a cover would be nice.

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Description
BLEH!
That's how I feel about these 2 pages. I just want to fill this with BLEEEEEH! But anyways...

Woot, first two pages of my audition. Huzzah! Traditionally! Hurray! And non-strait lines! Yay!
I must say, it's a very rough start. It gets better (I hope). Good thing the judges have to read the whole audition. I made A LOT of mistakes in the drawing and shading. I originally was going to have the 2nd page as the first page, but I realized that would be a HORRIBLE and REALLY obnoxious way to start it, so I put the flash back part in front of it.... Gosh that is one horribly drawn foot there....

But please give me your thoughts about it, I need as much help to just get through to the first round. Oh, and also, any ideas for a cover would be nice.

First: Here
Next:...