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BurningSeigfreid [2019-11-29 16:24:26 +0000 UTC]
Hum this one didn't quite come out as good. Maybe its the fact her skins still extremely pale.
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Skarloeyisyoung In reply to BurningSeigfreid [2019-11-29 16:31:28 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, I tried my best but I couldn't quite do the skin right
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BurningSeigfreid In reply to Skarloeyisyoung [2019-11-29 22:44:25 +0000 UTC]
You could of also used some Darker red in the hair, the things on her hips, the front part of her weapon(maybe), the segment part of her stockings/legs (the top with the two lights on it and the segments near the main part of the leg can stay the same, and the parts jutting out of her foot and tendon)
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BurningSeigfreid In reply to BurningSeigfreid [2019-11-29 22:45:37 +0000 UTC]
Also the area surrounding the core crystal should be black (what would be her boob window)
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BurningSeigfreid In reply to Skarloeyisyoung [2019-11-29 22:46:40 +0000 UTC]
This ones difficult and I know that just giving some good criticismΒ
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Skarloeyisyoung In reply to BurningSeigfreid [2019-12-02 08:33:45 +0000 UTC]
I has fixed it
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BurningSeigfreid In reply to Skarloeyisyoung [2019-12-02 09:19:00 +0000 UTC]
Looks a lot better though you still missed the tips of her hair but that seems to just be a thing that happens sometimes in your editing
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Skarloeyisyoung In reply to BurningSeigfreid [2019-12-02 09:23:04 +0000 UTC]
Should I try change it?
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BurningSeigfreid In reply to Skarloeyisyoung [2019-12-02 09:46:43 +0000 UTC]
I would if only because its a bad habit you have plus you kinda missed them twice
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Skarloeyisyoung In reply to BurningSeigfreid [2019-11-29 22:52:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks but I think I'll do minor things, not my fave thing fixing old mistakes
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