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Published: 2006-10-16 08:54:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1852; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 10
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The call came in while I was on the run from the Emperor's goons. My sister was distraught by something and needed me there. Even with half a squad of these H'aunds behind me, I risk a dimensional slip towards Gaia, her current home.Sis,
I will be there with arms open. Offering the shoulder to cry on and the arms to nestle in.
Kami © ASW '06'
Skech and art © Skech 2006.10.15.
Do not repost redraw or steal..bitches!
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Comments: 10
LostusAsLambus [2006-10-19 02:13:03 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful, both in composition and idea...yeah. Awesome. I'm glad I stumbled onto it.
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spitzen [2006-10-17 03:27:44 +0000 UTC]
This is a very beautiful consolation between brother and sister. ^_^
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Vaperfox [2006-10-17 00:19:55 +0000 UTC]
Wow! I'm overwhelmed by the amount of wonderful artistic elements present in this painting!
The first thing my eye noticed was the brilliant use of color in this pic. The strong orange tones of the brother form a nice contrast against the soft, pale fur coloring of the sister. The blue cast on the brother's hair and shoulders, along with the lighting in the background provide a calming atmosphere for these two characters to experience a moment of peace and tranquility.
Their expressions are very soft, but powerful, and I can sense the love between these siblings as these embrace one another. The body language presented by both characters lends even more comfort to an already loving scene.
One thing you could focus on would be the black glove (or is that a paw?) on the right hand. To the best of my knowledge, it's possible that this character has a black paw and white paw, but because of that red-rimmed wrist-bracer, I can't tell if it's one or the other. If its meant to be a glove, then perhaps you could add some sort of detail to the forearm end of the glove opening, like a strap or red-rimmed border.
Also, the tail at the lower right of the pic is distracting. My eye follows the brother and sister in a downward pattern until it becomes subverted in direction by the twisting of that tail. I think the composition of this piece would improve a bit more if the tail was omitted.
Other than that, this painting is well-executed and enjoyable to view. A very effective painting of the love between two siblings.
It's a fav of mine now! Good work!
Vaperfox of GENTEC
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SkechRoman In reply to Vaperfox [2006-10-17 10:47:44 +0000 UTC]
well this is, I think, the most detailed crit I have recieved to date. Thank you for taking time out to write it.
To answer your question Skech does have one white and one black paw. The red lined bracer called his Limiter drains some of his life force which made that paw black, so no glove there lol.
As far as the tail, well it is a part of her, at least you can follow it down and around lol. I am not a formally trained artist or maybe i would have caught that, but i do appreciate the crit as it DOES help me get better in design and composition.
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Vaperfox In reply to SkechRoman [2006-10-18 01:22:16 +0000 UTC]
Just glad I could be of help! I would've never guessed you weren't a formally trained artist, but I'm happy that my comments could provide you with some inspiration for the future!
Vaperfox of GENTEC
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Arctic-Sekai [2006-10-16 15:11:40 +0000 UTC]
well i dont think ive said anythign to u yet that someone already hasnt >> sooo
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