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Published: 2008-04-13 20:46:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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so im going to put up my thumbnails for the newest project i have for my graphic design class. and guess what you guys get to be my focus group!! muhahaha. now these are the rough versions ill be putting up, so i need in put on certain things, like:1.) is it readable, or does it hurt your eyes
2.) if it were hanging up somewhere, would it catch your eye.
3.) are there parts that seem to have too much or too little visual tension, and is that visual tension good or bad.
4.) which one you like most
basically this project was that we had to study a great graphic designer and try to incorporate it into a poster that isn't a replica of theirs but instead uses what they did in your own way. my designer was saul bass (who freakin rocked!). i would look him up if you want to.
lastly... i don't know why the background is gray instead of the jet black it is... eh... oh well.
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kalabrianwolf [2008-04-14 02:44:51 +0000 UTC]
1.) this is easily readable, and communicates 'event' or 'showing' well. i am able to easily understand the entire composition within a few moments and can understand the meaning well.
2.) it would catch my eye, especially since the revolver looks like a sixgun. very old west, which i dig. very gunslinger. i'd be excited that it had something to do with the Dark Tower, actually. >w<
3.) the flare seems a bit overused and unnecessary, but it does work well with the composition. i feel like the piece would work better with out it, to be honest. clean and simple.
4.) i like the raven one most.... but that's just my personal preferences showing up. but seriously, i think it's the most balanced, the most well executed, and the most visually stimulating.
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Launtaur [2008-04-13 23:49:28 +0000 UTC]
i think that this would catch my eyes if i was not in a rush to go anywhere. i do like it and the wording was interesting and mad me wonder what it was about.
on a side note the background does show up as pitch black on my computer.
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