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SketchMonster1 — Demonvile -unfinished-
Published: 2009-06-09 07:31:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 940; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 10
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Here is an illustration I;m working, I need critiques.Related content
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The level of detail is awesome. Great color blending. It looks like he should have some kind of arcane magicks growing in that one cupped claw.
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Looks good, I can't decide what to like best.
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Wow, WESOME i luf it it's cool 
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I have to say I like the green background, don't ask me why but it really goes well with the purple
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Wow, you say that's unfinished? I gotta admit you got one of those weird things they call talent
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Great job on this, i really like the perspective and the bluring effect around the head and body really gives the image a centre because the relatively unblurred head and body look sharper than the rest of the image, giving a point of focus.
Of course i don't know if you did it on purpose, but nevertheless it happened, and it works
Keep it up, you're better than me anyway, hehe.
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his left wing was kinda hard to read but other then that, it was stunning and just looks great, love what you did with it's right wing and just the postioning with the whole picture.
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I think it's good so far
Good choice for the pink and green match up. Those two colors together really give a softer demonic sense to the scene. I think if this piece had more than those two colors, it might get a little too exiting to the eye. Your use of a light source directly in front of the guy helps make him the focus, although the cloud/lightning thing in the background kind of steals some attention away from him. Good action pose for your winged demon guy
If I was to add anything, I would maybe add some lightning in the background to help reveal what the light source is in that cloudy atmosphere.
Nice work! I love it
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Nice!
You seem to have a fair amount of knowledge in the field of anatomy.
How do you make the shading and coloring that smooth? Tell me.
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Hmmm....I'm no good at critiques but.... I guess the background could be darker so to bring him out more.
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Yeah, it's nice, but i think you could increase the lights to make he jump from the bg, maybe you could put some volume of veins appearing at his muscles.
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Damn, you must have some of the H.P. Lovecraft story's as influance.
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The one thing I'd say is that perhaps a different colour for the secondary light source would make the figure pop out a bit more. Either that or deepening the shadows. Also a few of the highlights on the face and shoulders could be a bit more intense.
Not sure if that passes for "critique" but it's the best I can do at 4 in the morning.
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Amazing demon menn!!!!
i like your style!
and great wings effect, looks great
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Amazing demon menn!!!!
i like your style!
and great wings effect, looks great
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it's good,
I like how much pink you have in there
the colours look good to me.
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