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Skye-Fyre — Gryphon in progress
Published: 2006-07-31 15:18:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 539; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 17
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This isn't done, but I'm hoping for some advice before I contine. Specifically, the rocks. Agggh! Would lichen help? Of course, anything you have to say about the gryphon would also be wolcome, though he isn't done either. His throat needs defining, he needs some stronger lighting, and his wings need to be darkened and crisped up a bit.Related content
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*Looks again* Your gryphon's right wing (our left) is following the line of the page. I'd try to break that a little bit more.
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I'd probably add more feathers to the back of his neck. It looks very Bird-like right now, but keep inmind there are some powerful shoulders behind the neck that would cause the feathers to err... stick up? The top line just looks flat to me, but then again I have a more cartoonish style. Excelent detail.
I don't know how much detail you can do, but i think scattered sand on the rocks would help. Gryphons do like fish after all (or the ones in my story do) and typically live in cliffs along a coastline. So sand, and beach depris would be good. Maybe a fish bone or two? Seaweed? I hope this helps and isn't too critical. Your stuff really is great!
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I think there needs to be a little bit of ground in the background too... and some color on the rocks would make it really... fun. XD; It's very grey. Of course, don't take shit from me, you pwn alot. 
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