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Skylight22 — Transformers: Recoded Gueststar- TenRyuJin
Published: 2013-05-27 17:08:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1272; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 2
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Name: TenRyuJinAlt Mode: Missile battery truck
Weapons: Di-sulfide gun, francium rifle, magnesium "star storm" rocket system (robot mode), right wing symphonic tri-cannon, Patriot missile launching battery (vehicle mode)
Voice Actor: Nicole Oliver
Theme song: Shallow Water- Demon Hunter
Legend tells of three Great Archangels of Primus, GekiRyuJin, ChoRyuJin, and TenRyuJin. These superior defenders of thousands of worlds are said to have defeated millions of Decepticon legions, each within a matter of minutes, and are said to come again to end the war and protect the weak until the One who created the god of Light, Primus and the goddess of Chaos, Unicron comes to take the universe into a better realm and end time. May think these angels are folklore or bedtime stories for sparklings to give them hope in this dreaded war. Omega/Supreme is often deeply offended by this as she claimed to have been mothered by the Archangel TenRyuJin. Although the other Autobots might scoff, TenRyuJin does exist. She has scanned an Earth mode and remodelled her robot form to look like a modern-day agent to make her self almost unrecognizable but retains a great deal of her power. She is actually trying to conceal her existence until she feels that she is truly needed and until the Autobots are ready to accept her existence.
TenRyujin has no base character, rather she was imported from the GaoGaiGar anime to become part of my story. The same will go for GekiRyuJin and ChoRyuJin. Originally TenRyuJin was a combiner composed of two robots named KouRyu and AnRyu, but I thought the idea of the actual combiner becoming a transforming robot was much cooler. Lemme know what you think. (Side note, try to read the battery code upside-down.
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Comments: 23
It looks... okay. My main gripe is with the "hair" parts of the head, and the "wings" on the back. It kinda makes it look, I don't know, a bit Mary Sue-ish. It would probably look better if the "hair" was more like a mix of G1 Arcee and Prime Knockout, and if the trailer split into some back/shoulder cannons.
Other than that, I think this looks pretty nice.
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Well, to elaborate on the Mary Sue parts, the "hair's" asymetrical design and red (red-violet?) color scheme looks a little off and out of place on a generally silver and dark purple body.
In the case of the "wings", once more it's the general assymetry, but the little blue feathers(?) kinda make it look a bit weird. That and it looks a bit too shellform-y. In this case, I reiterate that it would work better as a pair of cannons on the back/shoulders, or, if you want to keep the wing aesthetic, have it split into a pair of angular bird wings akin to G1 Predaking or Nova Prime, or make it into a flight pack like various versions of Optimus Prime have.
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Well, the red-violet's actually supposed to be dark pink, hinting at the original Tenryujin's other half, Koryu, while the dark blue is supposed to represent Anryu. The same goes for the wing on one side and cannon on the other. As for the feathers... I will say I could have done better, but I do like them.
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Ah, that makes sense. Upon further observation, I think the only major issue with the hair is the anime-esque asymmetric design, which looks more at home on a YuGiOh character than a Transformer.
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Well, my Transformers are techno-organic, and I am going for an asymmetric design. Be that as it may, I can understand your point of view.
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Thank you. I'm not sure where the Mary Sue-ish part came from, though. Still, I'm glad you like it and I respect your tastes.
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I know that they are from GaoGaiGar. I even mentioned in the description. However, I do have to disagree with your state ment that it has nothing to do with Transformers. It does have similarities, and GaoGaiGar did help influence Transformers: Animated.
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Still, I don't see how that really justifies the "shouldn't be mixed" part. However, I will respect your opinion but I shall not dwell on it.
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Thank you very much. Don't you worry about that. Since I have time on my hands tomorrow and a flash drive, you'll at least see one more. But I agree, she is awesome and an example of archeofuturism.
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It's basically the older models looking more advanced than the newer ones. Old Futurism, if you will.
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She's only a thousand years younger than Primus.
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I finished it and luckily a few other things as well before I turned my computer in.
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Soon. Working on the description.
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What? Why would I think that?
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I've been there before, trust me. I have a couple of things for you to see. I completed ChoRyuJin, and if you didn't see it already, I have a list of humans as well.
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Thanks, and just tell me what you think in a comment.
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Always here with positive feedback.
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I've got a list of human characters if you wanna check that out.
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