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Published: 2017-12-03 12:25:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 364; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 0
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anyways I was listening to thiswww.youtube.com/watch?v=NY8IS0β¦
and raining audio and I drew this and it was pretty relaxing
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p.s I hate sundays
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The colors are amazing!! the body pose looks kinda weird tho,, like Tlmothy said, it doesn't look like the character is lying on the bed. Other than that, it's pretty good! Keep up the good work!!
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I'm feelin' liek sayin what I c rn:
The perspective is off, tots, the body seems liek, you just rotated it and not really lying on the bed. Maybe if you'd just had hidden or tricked the hair, it'd be already kinda bettah on that. the nearest leg to the wall, it should seem slightly tinier than the other and we shouldn't be able to see the pocket that well since it's on the side(?), it looks like it is at least from theΒ left leg. Also, the hand, it's on the top o'the breast but the fingers don't show it. Looks more like you tried to put it on the side and if it was the case, you should've bend them a little("fingers") to give the "not-a-piece-of-paper body. Now, I'm back with the hair but, the right side of it, the little strand of hair wouldn't be so far, it'd fall on the bed. Play more with the hair's flexibility, they give a lot o'informations on the position and add a good dynamic to the drawing. Even when it doesn't move at all.
The plant pot looks like it incorporated the wall. If you shade, next time, make sure to shade it well.
actually you can fix this just by playing with the layers, like with the carpet, it's all flat(under it), make it weigh, show it.Β
The papers and carnets or the floor are well placed, the carpet, not:
Don't try to get it parallel to the bed mattress, it's on the floor, not same place, not same directions(perspective).Β
About the bed too, the head o'the bed, it kills the perspective : the line isn't going the right way compared to all the other objects in the room. if you see what I mean. 'Not following the plan.Β
Here's a basic thing, prtty suer you've already been thaught this but, don't fear using the parallels from a point or smthin:Β
Β (I guess the point is in front and not all there in this but, yea, place point/s)Β
Like when you wanna 2 points, you can too:
(just realized it would've been faster to just google 1 point but wtvr, prtty suer then didn't put characters.. They probs did at sum POINT, hah, wtvr).
And so on.Β
Anyway, hoep it helped. Niec colors btw, you good at choosing dem.Β Β
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Oh damn I love the colors u choose for ur drawings!!! So pretty :^0
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