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Krad-Rokusho [2010-12-01 06:57:18 +0000 UTC]

actually i really like this look. if you would like a critique.

The arm that is is extended could be thinned and stretched, it looks a bit too short for her body. the shin closest to the viewer could be thinned closer to the bottom considering the calf is larger then the ankle and the shoes need a little more detail in the wrinkle department.

I'm not as good as you are but poses like this i like to do, cause eventually i want to become a artist of my own manga in the future. Overall this was an amazing attempt for a first try and I applaud you

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Dumdodore [2010-11-30 23:23:10 +0000 UTC]

First try is a hit and miss, second try is either improvement or not... but the third time's the charm.

I like the attempt you're tackling on, swirly clouds in the sky looks fine, and anything else I don't have anything to say there.

That's it. X3

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Tajii-chan [2010-11-30 13:33:42 +0000 UTC]

I don't think it's fail at all! D; I think it came out great

As always, your work is wonderful ^o^ I love the girl's expression and the simple yet sweet background!

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mb333 [2010-11-30 10:55:30 +0000 UTC]

i love how it looks watercolour! its an amazing perspective!

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Chugoku-jinko [2010-11-30 06:04:13 +0000 UTC]

what kind of textures do you use? because you always make it look like you color it traditionally with watercolors or with copic markers D:

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conquest79 [2010-11-30 05:45:32 +0000 UTC]

very nice.

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Shiroune [2010-11-30 05:11:11 +0000 UTC]

it doesn't look like a complete fail. I think the coloring makes up for it.

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