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Slasher12 — Forgive and Forget 11
Published: 2011-05-30 10:55:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 10868; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 0
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READ BEFORE YOU COMMENTAnd that‘s it. This chapter is done!
This is chapter 3 of the story the one with the Nightmare and Mortimer wakening up is was Chapter 2 title "The Nightmare".
Mortimer is happy about the approval for a chance but is having doubts about going back to the club.
Anyways I hope you like this chapter tell me what you think of it. What’s you’re thoughts and feelings to this concept idea You’re point of view of the characters?And stuff like that.
I’ll be happy to hear them.
----------Work that went into this Chapter----------
Drawing tools
Alvin Draft/Tec Retrac Mechanical Pencil 0.7mm/blue barrel with HB lead
Graphgear 500 Pencil - 0.7 mm Lead Size - Blue Barrel with Blue lead
Fanboy Comic and Manga Drawing Pad
Eraser
Screen caps of characters
Scanning, put together and transfer tools on computer
Canon MultiPass F50 Scanner
Paint (located in you computer accessories)
Flash drive
On Laptop;
Manga Studios
Wacome tablet
Word Processor
Special thanks to
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Characters © Disney
Comic and idea © Kim C. Jones
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Comments: 30
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I don't blame him for being worried about going back there.
hope he'll be okay though
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I know what you could do....just throwing it out there...you should do a comic about how it all started
just saying, I don't expect you to actually do it if you don't want to
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Before I forget it -memory probs - I want to say that some fan-pic artists have eventually become the official artists of the very strips they did fan-fics on.
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i guess some people CAN change....
still with mickey though !!
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I loved it! Very much want to see more! ^^
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Humm guess I was wrong well good for him I like this comic you got my watch!
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He hit's a realization moment when he's at the club he overhear everyone talking about him and they were pretty hurtful comments, so he got upset and he left walking out in the middle of a rain with out an umbrella he's between anger and sorrow, what he think he was and what he ends up learning. And to make it worst he was feeling odd that night and he fainted.
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Hmmm, I do like the overall plot of this story. I'm more often than not okay with stories about characters who are normally, well, assholes, trying to turn their act around. But for me, a pressing problem is execution, especially if you consider what said character has done in the past. With Mortimer, it's definitely doable.
I will hand it to you, the artwork and colour is very nice and I think you have the characterisations pretty much on the dot. However, to take as well as give, I have to be a bit critical on the matter of the execution of Mortimer's redemption. I just got the feeling that he was crying a bit TOO much in this chapter here, and his cries of begging for forgiveness didn't seem to me a lot like Mortimer. Again, I'm not saying he cannot redeme himself, but how he does so is something tricky to do, especially as we were shown no good characteristics from Mortimer in House of Mouse. I guess I would imagine him more of reluctantly apologizing, sounding more solemn and pulled together than bawling his eyes out. But maybe that's mostly down to my own tastes. For what is is here, It's still pretty good and it does look like it's going somewhere good.
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Thanks you for your feed back and thoughts on this
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Why do i have a feeling that what Mortimer says in the last panel will be the exact opposite to what really happens???
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I love it! You got the characters personalities down(Expressions, dialouge, reactions,etc.) I knew I would love the idea when you first mentioned it. And you are actually one of the few people that have a great idea and go for it and finish it. Like the rest of your readers, I can't wait for the club scene.
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I'm liking Mort now because of this comic.
And is something gonna happen at the club?
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let me guess, something horrible is gonna happen ):I
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Wow. This is awesome! Didn't have any idea what you wrote. But it almost blends in. Don't you think? This is SO good. Can't wait to see what happens to him now.
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Mickey will grow to like him. so will everyone elss.
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