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Well that it for this chapter.
And yes even thou he’s happy that Mortimer stood up for Goofy, Mickey is still unsure of Mortimer and this is where Chip and Dale come in, you’ll see why and how in the next chapter.
And yes sometime the characters may not be drawn right, All I got to say is that not everyone can get it right all the time.
The next chapter will deal with how Mortimer apologizes to everyone in the club and Pete teaming up with Blot
But for now what do you think of chapter 4: Return to the Club?
I still have yet to complete Chapter 2 and do Chapter 1
BTW if their’s a spelling error one the comic please send me a note do not put the correction here. Thank you very much.
----------Work that went into this Chapter----------
Background and Character Resource
House of Mouse Cartoons on you tube
Disney Wikia
INDUCKS
Drawing tools
Alvin Draft/Tec Retrac Mechanical Pencil 0.7mm/blue barrel with HB lead
Graphgear 500 Pencil - 0.7 mm Lead Size - Blue Barrel with Blue lead
Fanboy Comic and Manga Drawing Pad
Eraser
Screen caps of characters
Scanning, put together and transfer tools on computer
Canon MultiPass F50 Scanner
Paint (located in you computer accessories)
Flash drive
On Laptop;
Manga Studios
Wacome tablet
Word Processor
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Idea and comic © Kim C. Jones
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Comments: 48
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owowowoowwo i hope you draw more this is awesome
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Did you reas what they were saying?
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...Sorry, about that 
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Oh and I also love how the moment Mickey mentioned Chip and Dale, Donald's like, "WTF?!" LOL! In Donald's opinion (and mine), I'm pretty sure if anyone's bound to meet the guy downstairs, it'd be those two for all the crap they put Donald through!
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LOL! Your artwork is AMAZING! It looks like the real thing! And good, because I miss that show soooo much!
But...although I get Mickey being distrustful of Mortimer, I think both he and Mortimer's own conscience are being too hard on him. After all, Mortimer might've tried to keep Mickey and Minnie apart but unlike Pete and many of the other villains, he's never tried to take over the club or KILL Mickey! (In fact, in "April Fool's" Mickey was actually a BIG jerk and pretended to propose to Minnie only to have a fog horn blow in her face and when Mortimer good-naturedly put popcorn in his car engine, Mickey got back at him by pretending Mortimer RAN HIM OVER! Mortimer was actually quite sad to think he killed Mickey...in the beginning...lol!)
So as far as villains go, Mortimer is not that bad. But I get that it's YOUR fic and works for your purposes. I just found it strange that although Mickey is a bit more dark and rude than most people believe, that he wold take so long to forgive Mortimer when he's one of the better villains. Especially since Mickey has done even PETE a few good turns...and he DID wanna take over the club and tried to kill Mickey at least in the comics and early cartoons. But those are my two cents! 
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Thanks for the two cents I really miss the old shows.
"April Fool's " was a good exaple that shows the Mort wasn't all bad. and the fact he said this line"I know I treated ya like dirt but he was my only friend" prove it. Plus in two comics I read, Mortimer makes great allie to Mickey.
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Aww...no problem!
Yeah, he wasn't! If anything Mickey was more of a douche than him! He made Minnie think her dreams of marriage were coming true! I'd seriously DUMP my boyfriend if he EVER did that! -_- And then after Mortimer's light prank, he made him think he KILLED HIM! Good thing somehow Mortimer realized soon that he was being tricked, if not, he could've been traumatized! His expression was extreme enough!
Hmmm...that sounds cool! Where can I find these comics? They're really hard to come by in the States even though I'm in Spain now. But yeah, please continue! Your work is great!
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Yeah Mickey can be flat out mean wich made me glade he got what was coming to him at the end.
A friend of mind posted the comic here a link[link]
I think I remeber in my resarch that there are some comics Mortimer was in, in Spain but I never got the chance to read those.
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LOL! Yeah, me too! Stupid Mickey...>:0
Oh cool! Thanks!
Oh really?! Well, I'd have to look them up!
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Something tells me Mickey's going to try to trip Morty up with those mischievous 'munks....
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i think phantom blot must do his dirty job on next or on chapter after next chapter
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NNNNOOOOEEEESSSS!!!!!!!!!!! no more pages? T^T dangit.
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There be more don't worry I'm strating a new chapter of this.
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Why can't this show come back on TV? Just because it's not 3D (Mickey Mouse Clubhouse 3D)? I loved this show.
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Cause Disney don't care about thier past or respct Mickey. I hate that show it would have been so bad if they had a better plot and did the animation like Jake and the Neverland Pirates. it would have been ok.
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I know what you mean. This show should come back. =l
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Ether that or make new HoM eisode.
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If only they would. =l
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Hmmm, I have several ideas what that can be about but I don't want to possibly spoil it for anyone so I'll keep to myself. Anyway, love how the story is progressing and everyone's expressions.
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Awesome job on this page. I think I know what Mickey's up to...I can't wait for the next one.
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Thanks.
How gose the script writting?
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I'm working on it. It's not easy when it's Mickey being bothered by the bee. But I think I might have an idea.
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Yeah itt's easy with Donald but I guse with Mickey it diffrent, watching some of the old cartoon can give a good insperation
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It's not just that it's finding the appropriate start for it.
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Yeah starting at the begining is always the hard part I'm having the same issue with the begining of this comic.
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What I'm trying to do for this episode is rather than make it two stories is experiment by connecting them together. So I'm starting with Mickey starting on some of his house chores.
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That's cool. but how are you going to conncet the dog sitting on it's a completly differnt story.
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Oh believe me, in my first part of that script, I found a way to connect it together. It might be confusing to you but you might be surprised. I'll send what I started with now.
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This comic us unfolding into a grand masterpiece! Now I can't wait to see what chip and Dale are up to next ^^
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i love the charactor arc you've been doing with every one, Mortimors turn around and how every one is dealing with it.
you have really managed to catch to emoitions of distrust and unsertenty.
loving your work keep up the amazing stuff
P.s the charactors look great they seem misdrawn in any way at all.
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For a second I thought Micky was the blot in disguise or something. Lol, I forgot most of the characters so I thought the blot was some kind of Shapeshifter. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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