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Miku HatsuneRender: [link]
Made in PS
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Comments: 30
NekoAllen-chan [2012-03-26 06:19:13 +0000 UTC]
Can i right my comment in a critique like? With devious rating, vision, originality, technique and impact? If it was ok?
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And it will kinda really shows how i look at your artβ¦ i'll wait for your reply if i should comment itβ¦
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slashL In reply to NekoAllen-chan [2012-03-26 23:23:45 +0000 UTC]
Sure go ahead, i always appreciate a critique so i know what i should work on
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NekoAllen-chan In reply to slashL [2012-03-27 05:54:51 +0000 UTC]
Ok~
Devious Rating:
Vision:
Β» for me, the art is really good, the light is outstanding however it wasnfar to "blinding" in the upper right corner have the most "blinding" effect. True, it makes the art look very good, but the light is too "blinding" it cause the arms and legs to be quite unseen. For the background I'm having hard time thinking "Is the background a city at night or a circuit(spelling?) or probably something else" and last thing "is that Append Miku or Cyber Miku?" it looks robotic but appendishβ¦ why 3 1/2 stars? It's because everytime I have point out something cost 1/2 starsβ¦
Originality:
Β» to be truthful, i'm not always in searching Miku arts, I'm always in the Kagamines' section. So, personally, for me this is 100% original since i haven't seen any arts with this kind of theme.
Technique:
Β» I don't quite understand this section because every artist have their own technique oh well *shrugs* but I'll try my best, Well body proportion is fineβ¦ (Β΄ο½₯_ο½₯`)β¦ hmmmβ¦ robotic features are amazing! Really detailed! Hmmmβ¦ β’ β’ β’ γ i guess that covers it
Impact:
Β» When i first saw this art in my watch, i quickly said to myself "Wow! That art is Amazing! " I just don't understand why does the view and fave are not enough! Need more view and faves~!
that's that~
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slashL In reply to NekoAllen-chan [2012-03-27 23:25:29 +0000 UTC]
Vision: The background was really just me messing with the tools on PS and see what would happen
Originality: Thank you, i had 3 different ideas on what to do with this render and this was the only one that worked out
Technique: A great render will equal great results that's how i see it
Impact: I'm glad you like it all i have to say is "Haters Gonna Hate"
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NekoAllen-chan In reply to slashL [2012-03-28 01:29:13 +0000 UTC]
hahaha~ ya~ haters gonna hate~ they don't know what their missing~
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ilikedrawingstuffs [2012-03-25 23:48:02 +0000 UTC]
Yes,arguably,it's a little too bright.But the details that are still visible,yes,they are amazing. I definitely love the futuristic mechanical accessories on her.
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slashL In reply to ilikedrawingstuffs [2012-03-26 23:16:43 +0000 UTC]
Yeah i like the look of the render and already had something in mind for it, not the exact results i was going for but it worked out
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CreamPuffNinja25 [2012-03-25 23:17:50 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! It is a little hard to make out, unless it's supposed to be like that...
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slashL In reply to CreamPuffNinja25 [2012-03-26 23:32:22 +0000 UTC]
There were some mess up during the creation so i had to improvise, turned out better than i thought
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CreamPuffNinja25 In reply to slashL [2012-03-27 19:59:58 +0000 UTC]
Well, as long as you like it!
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Squeakable [2012-03-22 01:41:21 +0000 UTC]
This is very good!
One thing I miiiiight suggest is making it slightly darker....?
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slashL In reply to Squeakable [2012-03-23 20:51:39 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm, unfortunately i didn't make a psd of this but I'll keep that in mind for future wallpaper Thank you
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burningvegeta [2012-03-21 02:01:00 +0000 UTC]
I can't really tell what it is, but it looks fantastic.
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