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Published: 2004-11-05 14:54:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 96; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description There is too much beauty
Not enough time
Never any time
To stop
Look
Think
Feel
Feel pain and fear
Despair and horror
Feel life.

There is too much time
Too much life
Not enough beauty
No more feeling
Nothing
Gone
Eternity to kill
No death
No life
No thought

There is too much feeling
Not enough thought
No time
Not for wisdom
You follow your heart
Your heart pulls you down
Living
Breathing
Longing
Knowing
Falling
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Comments: 5

doubledareya [2005-07-28 14:20:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I like this one. It makes you think. Great job! I don't have any criticisms...

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Sleepiful In reply to doubledareya [2005-07-28 16:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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doubledareya In reply to Sleepiful [2005-07-28 17:29:28 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome. <3

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Sleepiful [2004-11-06 13:04:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I like writing poetry, so maybe I should work a bit harder on it.

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Psycho-Mantis27 [2004-11-05 17:04:26 +0000 UTC]

It's good. You should write more. This one's a bit flat, to me at least. You can do a lot to improve it, and you can too. It's not hard to improve your poetry skills. Just write more, and read and experiment and you're basically there. Great work

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