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Random title. :'DBut I drew this for one of my buds, I really love her character x3
Sorry I couldn't get all the details perfect. There's so many. D': But I really hope you like it! >u<
First the first time, like, EVER (not exaggerating) I'm maybe, kinda, slightly....proud of how it turned out?
OH GOD I FEEL SO SELFISH NOW. *shot*
But please comment on what you like and what I could improve on next time! ;u;
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Comments: 130
RainStoneZe3rd [2011-09-02 14:11:48 +0000 UTC]
kawii....... It's so kawii I'm gonna blows up!
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sleuthingLicorice In reply to RainStoneZe3rd [2011-09-02 17:28:18 +0000 UTC]
Nu, don't blow up! D8
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sleuthingLicorice In reply to deaththevampirebat [2011-09-01 16:29:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it. Sorry it took long to do D':
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deaththevampirebat In reply to sleuthingLicorice [2011-09-01 16:35:48 +0000 UTC]
X3 its worth it
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anthey925 [2011-09-01 04:04:47 +0000 UTC]
Awesome. And if you want to know what I like and where you could improve here you go: Well the shading looks good, you did an especially good job around the hair. It all goes well together. The line art is also nice and smooth, which is good because people don't like looking at shaky line art. The line art could have thinner lines but that's probably just me. Also, the right ear is a little smaller than the other ear and the left wing is also smaller than the right wing but those are things people don't really notice. You could also connect the left arm's line to the body so that line sticking out doesn't look so noticeable and when you click full view of the picture you can see tiny white dots/lines things around some of the areas. I know how those white dots/lines things happen but since there aren't many you could probably fix them with the smudge tool. That's really all the critique I can give since it's harder to do it on a chibi (I can't comment on the pose, hands, feet etc. but it's okay since that's the chibi style). I think this is a really awesome picture (lol and sorry for the long comment).
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sleuthingLicorice In reply to anthey925 [2011-09-01 04:08:53 +0000 UTC]
1. She's facing somewhat of an angle, so the smaller ear was on purpose. XD;;
2. Than you for putting out the white lines and weird arm! I'll do better next time >u<
And yeah, this was a really good critique. You're one of the few people who will actually tell me how I can improve on my drawings, thanks! x3
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sleuthingLicorice In reply to ChaosShadow95 [2011-09-01 03:41:03 +0000 UTC]
You ALWAYS think she's cute. xD
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sleuthingLicorice In reply to Hammer--Time [2011-09-01 03:21:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you're just saying that. >w<
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Hammer--Time In reply to sleuthingLicorice [2011-09-01 03:23:31 +0000 UTC]
No c: I'm telling the truth! C:
Its absolutely better than what I can do! xD
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sleuthingLicorice In reply to Hammer--Time [2011-09-01 03:24:18 +0000 UTC]
fff. You draw awesome. >:U
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Hammer--Time In reply to sleuthingLicorice [2011-09-01 03:38:24 +0000 UTC]
lkesahlse prove it :U
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sleuthingLicorice In reply to Keies [2011-09-01 03:21:48 +0000 UTC]
They're scary? D:
But thanks. >u<
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Keies In reply to sleuthingLicorice [2011-09-01 03:25:05 +0000 UTC]
Yesssss. But it depends on the art actually, that make me scared of them... Ones with huge eyes bigger than their body scares mee....
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sleuthingLicorice In reply to Keies [2011-09-01 03:44:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god. I LOVE your art. ;A;
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Keies In reply to sleuthingLicorice [2011-09-01 03:46:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Thanks for adding it. :3
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sleuthingLicorice In reply to Keies [2011-09-01 03:49:45 +0000 UTC]
That's it. I'm watching you. >:U
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