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Published: 2004-01-16 00:18:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 224; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Description Breaking the tension
is like bending steal.
dont know where to go
I'm drunk at the wheel
               Man its over

Ending the silence
like scratching till I bleed
weve planted romance
just like a seed.
                    
Filling in the gaps
I cant hold on
as my life starts to spin
where have you gone.  
              Its over

This always happens
Im writing a poem
where are you
I'm all alone.
                Its over

Things arnt different
but they'll never be the same
Im just so happy
I might go insane cause,
              Its only just begun
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Comments: 10

Randomchica [2004-01-23 05:01:51 +0000 UTC]

i really like the structure of it sweetie. adds a nice effect. the poems displays a nice emotion of friendship mixed with love...nice job!!

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walley-jason [2004-01-20 19:52:04 +0000 UTC]

i feel ya man... that line between friendship and love is such a delicate one... specially when all you want in the end is someone to be your friend forever and love you when you need it.

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O-Wise-Master [2004-01-20 10:15:35 +0000 UTC]

romance and love bear the risk of hurting a good friendship - like forces you to go against the odds, and take risks. Such is the way

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smallfrie In reply to O-Wise-Master [2004-01-20 12:19:06 +0000 UTC]

I hope that what you said ment "good luck"

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O-Wise-Master In reply to smallfrie [2004-01-20 14:10:54 +0000 UTC]

it meant that - yes

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kreaper [2004-01-17 00:33:23 +0000 UTC]

man i remember feeling like that before
but its been so long that im not even sure if those moments even matter

but dont let my bring you down from your love sickness

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smallfrie In reply to kreaper [2004-01-20 00:17:21 +0000 UTC]

they proabaley dont matter but they do right now and thaTS ALL THAT matters ( sorry for the caps locks)

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Reekhavok87 [2004-01-16 00:57:51 +0000 UTC]

i like it, but in the second stanza, shouldnt it have something like "Its over" ? to match the other stanzas, not sure if u did it on purpose to maybe show that its not completely over...

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smallfrie In reply to Reekhavok87 [2004-01-16 00:59:21 +0000 UTC]

i did tat on pupose becasue i didnt want to say that our newly planted romance is over.. the only thing that is over is our normal friendship... sometimes that can be scary

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Reekhavok87 In reply to smallfrie [2004-01-16 01:00:29 +0000 UTC]

ahh, now i understand hehe

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