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Published: 2007-12-08 03:33:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 323; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description what if the earth WAS flat? then you'd be living just next block wouldn't you?
what if you and i were dreams? starting afresh every night, only to be forgotten in the morning.
what if you and i decided to pack our bags and head north? to fall asleep in the cradle of the himalayas. forever.
what if at this very instant the voices you hear had hammers, and they battered your skull till sunbeams flew out the cracks? till there was nothing but you left there.
what if the roadside trees were actually waving? would you ever be able to tolerate the guilt of not waving back, all these years?
what if you and i were one? yes, i know its a roundabout way, but i hope your tendril hair are a fair excuse.
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Aquariem [2012-01-09 08:46:15 +0000 UTC]

what if at this very instant the voices you hear had hammers, and they battered your skull till sunbeams flew out the cracks? till there was nothing but you left there.

I love that line. It's absolutely fabulous.

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Takimashou [2010-06-17 02:54:26 +0000 UTC]

That was very cool.
But I'm not sure if there's an error in that last line, or I just don't get it.
Actually, I probably don't get it anyway.

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smalltimer In reply to Takimashou [2010-06-17 10:36:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment! And the fav!!

The last line is the final proposal. He makes an excuse for his roundabout way of saying things by saying that the girl has curls in her hair.

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soyouwanna [2008-06-24 08:02:45 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one. especially the waving roadside trees.
what're you up to these days? hoping round india splashing colour on everyone? ah no, there's a certain day for that. unfortunately.

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smalltimer In reply to soyouwanna [2008-06-25 17:59:39 +0000 UTC]

i am glad you like something in my collection ^_^
i am working now. don't get much online time anymore you could mail me whenever you miss me. but NOT on the msn id. i don't use it anymore. the gmail or the yahoo ids only. and yeaps. i miss you loooooaaaadddssss
hope you're good there you chocolate-skirt girl

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soyouwanna In reply to smalltimer [2008-06-26 07:45:45 +0000 UTC]

chocolate skirt girl? mmmmm sounds delicious.
well yea I don't normally miss my overseas couldbe-friendships that I've never really seen face to face. but I DO recognize you.
how's college? your jenny? haha I'm like some grandma. asking about school and stuff. yesyes. I'm sure you'd love to discuss your lovelife with me. maybe not.

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