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Published: 2009-04-11 17:48:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 3156; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 56
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Description It has still some mistakes but i'll manage to fix them untill the end off the contest ^^

the story of this drawing: An evil comes to the world and destroys everything. In a corner of a building a statue of an angel turns real and is preparing to fight the evil.

Hope you like it ^^
Good luck to me

ps. 90 layers on ps cs3..... but i think only 70 of them survived XD
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Vrolok87 [2009-04-11 18:55:43 +0000 UTC]

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Impact


For me this deviation is impressing. You had a great vision of the battle scene between Angel and Demon. I like especially how you made the dark side: the demon is mighty, strong and really evil. The fire burning on his arms and between destroyed buildings looks realistic. There's not too much of it, but also not too less. Buildings are drewn thriftily (hope it's a good word in English), only symbolically, but it's good. It makes more impression, when looks like that.
The thunder is just great! e.deviantart.com/emoticons/c/c… " width="25" height="25" alt="" title="Clap" />
Lights and shadows also are good on this picture, but for me there could be more color and shadows contrast between them. But this may be just my own vision, not the technical problem.
And I like the movement on the picture - everything flows and moves.
But the angel is for me just wrong. It looks like his hair grows not only from his head, but also from hisback. Maybe it had to be like this, but I don't like it. And the hair doesn't look realistic, more like some thorns, like hedgehog has. His wings grows in wrong direction, doesn't look like they grows from the angel's back.
Angel's arms are too long and too big. The left hand is generally too small, only the arm is too long.

But that, what I like in the angel, is head - it's beautiful, like angel's head and face should be. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> His hands are good too - subtle and good drewn. Upper parts of wings are goos too - I like their lighty look and shape. Only the lower parts you could draw better. Make a indentation in the central point, under the highest point, where the wing bends. This should be the narrowest part of the wing.
And I'd draw angel's knee. You took the easier way and didn't draw his legs, but to make the picture more impressive, you should draw his leg (or even both) under the material.
And I think you shouldn't cut the wing, but draw it all. Without any wall behind the angel - then it would make more impression.

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Smaragdia In reply to Vrolok87 [2009-04-11 19:07:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much for your critique.
as i said i still keep working on it.
the angel was too hard especially to make it look like statue. and i also wanted the angel to look weak to show the difference between evil and good. Because people tend to be more evil than good for a lot of reasons And those reasons give strengh to devil and angel each one.
i'll keep working on it. thank you for telling me my mistakes

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Vrolok87 In reply to Smaragdia [2009-04-11 19:18:34 +0000 UTC]

I see. Umm... Now the angel doesn't look like statue. Maybe you should make it not alive, but from the stone? Just a "real" statue? And to show his weakness, break him in some points. Just as angel statues from cemeteries looks like.

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Smaragdia In reply to Vrolok87 [2009-04-11 19:31:51 +0000 UTC]

i dont know how to do it. but i'll guess i'll find a way ^^

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Vrolok87 In reply to Smaragdia [2009-04-11 19:34:28 +0000 UTC]

I think first of all - if you don't know how to draw stones - you should find some stone pictures and draw. Or - to take easier way - find some angel statues photos and redraw them here.

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TheAdversarySucceeds [2010-12-28 22:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting concept, I like it!

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Smaragdia In reply to TheAdversarySucceeds [2010-12-29 08:01:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

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dream-club [2009-06-24 10:57:04 +0000 UTC]

Your club submission is included here:
[link]



=dancingelf

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Smaragdia In reply to dream-club [2009-06-24 13:11:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!!

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DigiMax2 [2009-05-25 21:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Nice work, best of luck.

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Smaragdia In reply to DigiMax2 [2009-05-26 05:12:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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WingDiamond [2009-05-08 02:15:21 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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Smaragdia In reply to WingDiamond [2009-05-08 07:39:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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super-proxy [2009-04-30 03:16:40 +0000 UTC]

Epic concept!

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Smaragdia In reply to super-proxy [2009-04-30 07:31:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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super-proxy In reply to Smaragdia [2009-05-04 06:52:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Kevrekidis [2009-04-26 13:19:50 +0000 UTC]

Great concept!!!

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Smaragdia In reply to Kevrekidis [2009-04-26 19:34:20 +0000 UTC]

se euxaristw para poly

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jotoge [2009-04-17 20:20:57 +0000 UTC]

WOW! This is sooo cool, great job

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Smaragdia In reply to jotoge [2009-04-20 10:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Audodo [2009-04-14 10:00:58 +0000 UTC]

great good luck with the contest

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Smaragdia In reply to Audodo [2009-04-14 10:21:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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ftourini [2009-04-13 14:18:19 +0000 UTC]

SUPER!

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Smaragdia In reply to ftourini [2009-04-13 14:25:18 +0000 UTC]

xairomai pou s aresei

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riamali [2009-04-13 14:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Prepei na einai o,ti kalutero exeis kanei mexri twra

Sunexise etsi

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Smaragdia In reply to riamali [2009-04-13 14:24:56 +0000 UTC]

oo euxaristwww polyyyyyyyyy

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ObscureBeauty-Art [2009-04-12 17:52:17 +0000 UTC]

aha!! the statue came out pretty good!!

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Smaragdia In reply to ObscureBeauty-Art [2009-04-12 18:34:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you i tried to give very sharp shades and lights i hope it;s ok now ^^
i'm very clad you like it

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ObscureBeauty-Art In reply to Smaragdia [2009-04-13 15:37:17 +0000 UTC]

it's really great,specially her dress. ^^

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Smaragdia In reply to ObscureBeauty-Art [2009-04-13 17:28:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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FlamingKhHeart [2009-04-12 14:51:24 +0000 UTC]

mamato to update milame,s vghke para poly kalo,a3ize to xrono p s efage,kalh s epityxia sto contest,s eyxomai na skizeis!!

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Smaragdia In reply to FlamingKhHeart [2009-04-12 15:12:28 +0000 UTC]

se euxaristwwwww

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znMatt [2009-04-11 18:07:27 +0000 UTC]

einai katapliktiko ..pragmatika o.o
latrevo ta ftera tis kopelas,kai m'aresi poy ton exis kani "cloudy-like" an katalavenis ti enoo (en mporo na to perigrapso sosta).
episis exis veltiothi paaaara poly sto coloring *_*

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Smaragdia In reply to znMatt [2009-04-11 18:16:42 +0000 UTC]

se euxaristw paaaaara para poly xairomai poly pou blepeis ekseliksi

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soul-rose [2009-04-11 17:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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Smaragdia In reply to soul-rose [2009-04-11 17:50:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you very very much

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