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smoshgoshjosh — Far Beyond {Request}
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Published: 2017-04-24 01:48:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 827; Favourites: 93; Downloads: 0
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For TheOutli3RKitsch has arrived at the Far Lands, a distant and serene countryside, rich with lush forests and flowing rivers... Paradise...
This is a long overdue request for an amazing person, I hope that the quality makes up for the delay! ^^'
This took about 55 minutes to complete! =^-^=
I hope you like this!!!
Main Background: Far Beyond {Request}
Alternate Background: Forest Protector
(The backgrounds are screenshots and photoshops! ^^')
Character © 2017 TheOutli3R
Art ©2017 smoshgoshjosh
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Comments: 30
Vision:
I think this piece is very visual, you can tell that the character in this painting is happy, and enjoys the place that he's at.
Originality:
I honestly dunno what to put here. Sorry
Technique:
The fur is very detailed, It's very good, but I feel like it looks rather too blurry, it's like it's something that you may see in the background of a scenery. Maybe if you would recline from having it look blurry and try some different techniques, (I'm not saying it's bad- just if you could work on it...) it may pop out some more. The lines on the face seem not to exactly blend in with the colors of your character, like the nose's outline looks totally different from the pallet of the nose itself- making it look kinda awkward, the same goes for the teeth as well, the teeth are white, but have white outlines. And if you could possibly try to paint your own backgrounds, that would be cool too, it's just all of these backgrounds have a totally different style than the style that you have already mastered.
Impact:
Overall this piece gives a quite happy vibe, which makes me quite happy as well. The piece explains a lot of how he's feeling, and where he is. Thank you for reading this, I hope it helps you, and I also help I wasn't coming out as rude ;-;
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*black outlines, not white outlines (for the teeth)
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This is a really nice piece you've done here! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Vision - The background blends with the character well and helps the character stand out which helps focus the eyes of the viewer to the main part of the image.
Originality - (I don't have anything to say here)
Technique -
The fur texture on the character is very well done, but I'd work on the mouth a bit. The black outline sticks out too much; maybe try outlining it with a darker shade of the marking's color? Same with the teeth. I recommend tinting the teeth more yellow, but not so much that it's super obvious. Also, try adding smoothed lines that are a darker shade of the teeth; it gives it more dimension and pops out more. The nose could do with a colored outline as well. The lower jaw should still have a black outline, but try to make it shine in the lighting so it fits in with the rest of the piece.
The background was a nice choice, however, I can tell you did not create the background yourself, which is what bothers me. I recommend trying to make your own backgrounds. In no means does it have to be fancy, but at least put some effort into them. Tutorials for them are all over DA so I doubt you'll have any trouble finding any. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Overall, I'm not heavily impacted by this piece, but you have been improving in quite a few places. I hope you don't feel hard on yourself for what I said. Critiques are there for a reason.
Anyways, I hope you have a wonderful rest of your day! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
~Lunora e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
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So pretty! Love the expression and lighting on the character ;w;
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holy cow! Your art has improved tremendously since I've last seen it, incredible job!!! Keep up the great work!
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This guy will actually looks very happy in this tropical paradise. 
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Oh my goodness! >X3
Thank you so much!
It means so much to get a comment from you! =^-^=
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A pleasure, you deserve it 
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AHHHHHHH!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
It means a lot to get a comment from you!
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Thank you very much!
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Stunning artwork!
The colours contrast the background perfectly and this makes the character visible and noticeable! Nice use of light and shade and character positioning!
Improvement advice; with the black lines, possible make a choice if you'll have them or none at all, this tends to create a more realistic effect (without lines) and a non-realistic effect, almost toony (with lines). Or, if you want to make it more interesting, then use the shaded areas with lines and lighter areas with white lines. You can also colour the lines like this: xxwhitewolfxx3.deviantart.com/… (as an example)
That makes it more realistic and can also help guide out the piece, making the edges crisp and visible!
Overall, amazing piece! Keep it up!
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All lineless or all lined, got it!!
Also, add some white lines, thanks! ^^
I will definitely use this advice in my next art pieces! Thank you!!! *hugs*
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Try only use these in really bright pieces however, but it will still give a good effect
You're welcome!
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Oh goodness this looks absolutely AMAZING!!
Really, you just keep getting better and better!
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AHHHHHHH! Thank you for the kind words! You're awesome!
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Oh.
My.
GOD.
Dude this is beyond epic!! You captured her personality 100%, and I gotta say the background is just spectacular! She looks like she's on a proper adventure! Thank you so so much, friend! There's nothing I don't love about this
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Oh my goodness! I didn't know that you would like this THAT much at first, now I feel so happy thanks to you. You definitely motivated me to draw more art this week. =^-^=
If you EVER want to do an art trade or have a request, please feel free to ask!
Again, thank you soooo much!!! ^0^
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Aww thanks fantastic to hear! I'm glad I could provide you with a little bit of motivation/inspiration ;>
And of course it does! I had no idea you were gonna make me TWO backgrounds, and both of such quality! I'd love to trade with you, but I need to finish my commission queue first. Would it be alright to poke you in a few weeks when I'm all finished and we can set something up from there?
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This looks amazing! Great job on the fur details and the shading!
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Thank you so much!!! I will definitely make more like this! Thank you for the kind words! =^-^=
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I think Kitsch is a pretty cute character too!
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Tehe, I think he did a great job :>
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