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Chapter 1 is finally done! It was tough, but I rode it out and I feel like I'm getting the hang of this. I already have a few things in mind that I need to work on for the next chapter (such as a bigger page and more planning beforehand), but what do you guys think? Any feedback would be much appreciated on both the art and the story.
Anyway, the next chapter won't be for another couple of weeks. I have a lot of work to do.
Art by me
Story by TokoWH
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That looks SO realistic the way he was lifted into the bag. I like it!
Time to escape from the dungeon!
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okay, an improvement from the last page...
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ohh this looks very interesting!! I like the comic a lot already.
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I just read through the first chapter again to practice for the casting call.
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that ninetales shot out like BEAM ME UP SCOTTY gg
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does he have the power tho-
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Looks good Snaps. There's not much I can really think to improve on. At most, maybe perspective needs some improving on? Even then, though, I could only think of one notable example on that front. (The Lucario in the previous page when he off hand backhands the Houndour.) Even then, though, it's not too overly noticeable.
I really appreciate you working on this with me. If there's anything you'd like me to improve on story wise, let me know.
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Alright, thanks for the feedback.
And you're welcome. It's a lot of fun working with you.
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There's something I find heartwarming in the way that ninetales put the riolu into her bag.
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Thanks! That's just what I was aiming for.
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