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Name > Komodo
Nickname(s) > Komo
Tribe > MudWings
Occupation/Affiliation > N/A
Mentor/Apprentice (if applicable) > N/A
Talon/Order (if applicable) > N/A
Appearance > Komodo is a broad-shouldered, fairly tall MudWing, with very dark scales. He has dark brown at the top of his head and along the spikes of his body, fading into a lighter brown on his scales. The rest of his face is a mixture of brown and dark dark red, that makes up the underside of his body and tail. His legs are a mixture of dark brown and red, and he has faint orange highlights on his chest and belly. His wings are a gradient of red to a fairly dark orange, and he has amber colored eyes.
Scars > N/A
Age > 11 years
Sex > Male
Gender > Male
Pronouns > He/Him
Sexuality > Bisexual (Leaning towards females)
\\ A B I L I T I E S //
(List the powers your OC has, or note that they just have normal abilities for their tribe. In the Skills section, to prevent inflation of OP characters, you may only list 2 skills total as an 9/10 or above, and only 4 skills total as 7/10 and above. 5/10 is average. SkyWings may automatically take 8/10 on Flying without it counting towards the high-skill limit; SeaWings may automatically take an 8/10 on Swimming without it counting towards the high-skill limit).
POWERS > He is able to hold is breath for up to an hour and breathe fire if its warm enough. He also is a bloodegg, which means that he was born with fire-resistant scales. This allows him to touch firescales for longer than a few seconds, and to resist fire. He still however, can get burned with hot enough fire.
SKILLS > Komodo is a relatively good swimmer, his powerful legs easily able to push through weak currents and rough waters. He is also an excellent fighter, having trained in the bloodsquad, using his relatively bulky stature and size to dish out blows towards enemies.
Survival > 4/8. [1+3]
Tribe Abilities > 5/8
Fireproof > [4/8]
Proficiency: Knuckle Weapons > [3/8]
Swimming > [3/8]
Empty Slot >
Education/Training >
STATS >
LEVEL: 1
TIER: 1
Strength > [ 9/11]
Agility/Dexterity > [ 4/10]
Defense/Constitution > [ 6/10]
Intelligence/Book Smarts > [ 4/10]
Wisdom/Observation >[ 3/10]
Charisma > [ 4/10]
Stamina > [ 6/10]
Flying >[ 5/10]
\\ P E R S O N A L I T Y //
(Write 2-3 sentences about each trait and how your character expresses it. You may add extra secrets/fears/dreams if you wish, but you must list at least one of each).
POSITIVE:
Controlled > Komodo is able to repress any sort of emotions he's feeling at the moment, easily putting them behind a stoic face and a hard gaze. Komodo rarely ever loses control over his actions and his temper, keeping them both in check when talking to someone. No matter what dragon he speaks to, Komodo always seems to be rather calm around them-unless he chooses not to be, that is.
Decisive > Komodo is quick to make a decision-he rarely ever hesitates in his choices, and finds that deciding something is simple and quick. He never lingers on a thought for too long, doing what he thinks is best in the situation. If you ever need someone to give you a definite answer in a short amount of time, Komodo is your best bet.
Adaptable > Under any situation or scenario Komodo is in, he will certainly be quick to recover from shock or pain. He is able to adjust quickly and without complaint, usually being one of the first to set his mind straight and continue on with life. He doesn't mind change, and sometimes, he actually prefers it to a boring life.
NEUTRAL:
Aloof > While he is rather well-known, and does often make himself appear public, Komodo can be a bit of a **double-edged sword.** He likes to keep to himself most of the time, and rarely tries to interact with dragons that he doesn't know very well. Komodo will often brush aside attempts at making friendships, finding them to be a bit too difficult to try and maintain. He's overall a pretty introverted Mudwang, but he's chill with anyone who tries talking to him. He's usually pretty civil with them, unless they rub him the wrong way.
Non-Intuitive > Komodo, while he is easy with decisions, makes them based off of facts and situations. He can't really base things off of his own feelings-he had learned that from his young days as a prince. If it was better for the kingdom-then you did it, no matter what you felt about it. Komodo has never really gotten rid of that trait as he grew up, and still constantly bases decisions off of 'what is better for everyone' rather than 'what do I really want'. This can be pretty bad in certain situations, where he can unintentionally hurt dragons by not thinking about their feelings in a situation.
Realistic > Komodo is not one to dream. He doesn't dream big or large, he has realistic expectations and goals in mind. He never wonders about what could happen if he did something differently, nor does he make up any fantasies about it. This can lead to Komodo being a bit of a downer in situations. He won't ever be convinced of imagining anything different in his life, which can ultimately lead to Komodo being a bit..pessimistic in scenarios.
NEGATIVE:
Judgemental > Komodo is quick to find a flaw in a dragon-and even quicker to point it out. He's rather blunt in his statements, but he does sometimes enjoy getting a rise out of a dragon just because they disagree with what he's saying. Usually he'll keep his opinions to himself, but if you annoy him enough, he's quick to fire them out at you.
Insensitive > A lot of times when making a decision or picking a choice, Komodo rarely thinks about the emotional side of the decision. He is firm with his decisions and this often leads to his choices and actions being sometimes cruel and "heartless". Komodo also rarely ever takes into account what others might feel with his words and actions, but that's also kind of him being oblivious.
Bystander > Sadly, Komodo is not a dragon of action-at least, when it comes to bullies. He prefers to watch from the sidelines, only partaking if the dragon being bullied got on his nerves. However, usually he won't defend or help the victim, instead, either watching it or sometimes joining in on the bullies. Even to his closest friends, he won't defend them against another dragons words or actions. He'll just watch, sometimes pointing out facts and trivia to give either the bully or the victim an advantage. Usually, it's the former. : )
LIKES >>
-His mom
-MudWings
-SkyWings
-Blood Squad
-Cinnamon (the spice ofc)
-Cows
-Honey
-Sass Squad
DISLIKES >>
-Fish
-Dragons that are 20/10 annoying
-Weak-minded dragons
-Vain dragons
-Humidity
-Anyone who disses his mommy >
-Sand
-Anyone who murders MudWings for no reason (COUGHSCOUGHS)
SECRETS:
> hes a total becky
> He loves Queen Ibis's arena fights.
FEARS:
> The dragons that he's close to will end up betraying him/dying
> He'll die wishing he had done something different in his life
> He becomes apart of something that goes against what his mother taught him.
> His mother/siblings dying
WISHES/DREAMS:
> To spend more time with all of his sibs
> To make his parents proud
> To become leader/second in command of the Blood Squad
> To make his time on the Mezzo worthwhile
\\ H I S T O R Y //
(Delete the portions which are not applicable to your OC; write at least 4 sentences per age category that applies).
(If your OC is part of the Alliance or a student at the University, make sure you include how they got there! - They should have been recruited by an Alliance member that was impressed with their potential, or gotten a letter of recommendation from their Queen and then been accepted by the Council of Six).
Pre-Hatching > Before Komodo was born, his father, Cranberry, was a loyal concubine to her majesty, Queen Salamander. Being a bloodegg, and apart of the Blood Squad, it was easy to see that he would produce heirs one day. The first clutch he had with Salamander consisted of 5 eggs, with only one of them being a bloodegg MudWing. He loved them all, but with his duties to Salamander and to his siblings in the Blood Squad, it would be hard to give each one special attention like a true father would. Besides, with Salamander's obvious favoritsm towards their daighter Moccasin, he figured that he had to at least try. His dragonets eventually grew up all into fine young MudWings, which made Cranberry bittersweet, as he was able to finally let them be adults, but was also sad he couldn't spend more time with them. Years passed before Salamander had her second clutch with Cranberry (completely planned i swear), where once again, only one bloodegg was born.
Baby Dragonet > Prince Komodo was born to the royal family, being the son of Queen Salamander and her MudWing concubine Cranberry. He was born into a clutch of 4, with 3 siblings. Heron, Reed, and Mayfly. Heron was the bigwings, of the group, hatching first and helping out all the others. Komodo was second, Reed was third, and Mayfly was last. Komodo, being a bloodegg, had immediately won Salamander's heart just by being a bloodegg. As a young dragoet, he would constantly look to please his mother, wanting to receive her affection and praise. He was also relatively on good terms with his siblings, despite the obvious favoritsm, he would constantly play with them as well, whether it be hide and seek, play fighting, etc. However, pretty soon, it became apparent that he would have to put his time with his siblings to a halt as he was put into the Blood Squad to train.
Dragonet > From the moment he started Komodo showed promise in being a good Blood Squad member. His relationship with Queen Salamander ultimately let his loyalties lie to her and his kingdom. He was fairly large in size-not as large as his sister Heron, but still pretty big. He was eager to learn and impress his mother, wanting to be the bloodegg child that Salamander wanted him to be. With this unwavering loyalty, however, meant that he had put a slight strain on his relationships with his siblings. Of course, they still loved him and vice versa, but with his limited amount of time with them, tensions were starting to get high. Since Komodo had no real Blood Squad siblings, and his real siblings weren't usually training with him, it led Komodo to be a bit more introverted. He still spoke to others, but pretty soon the prince had decided to keep out of anyone's way. Still though, Komodo and his siblings were still relatively close to one another, considering how strong their kinship was when they were younger. Queen Salamander often brought Komodo and his siblings to the gladitorial games that Queen Ibis hosted, which Komodo and Heron greatly enjoyed. They also sparred constantly with one another, Komodo trying to perfect a certain move he learned in the Blood Squad, which Heron would then attack him with. In the Blood Squad, Komodo made sure to make his mother proud, constantly working hard and training even after he got to go back to his siblings. He tried perfecting every single thing he learned, and didn't stop until he was absolutely certain that it was perfect. He sometimes would leap at his own mother, just to see how she'd react to his form and his lunge. Komodo trained nonstop until the age of 7, making sure his mother knew that he was going to be a fit member of the Blood Squad.
Young Adult > Komodo was content with his life in the Mud Kingdom. He had great siblings, a great mom, and a good dad. He didn't mind it at all, and he didn't wish for anything different. He knew he was lucky with the life he was dealt, and he wasn't going to take that for granted. During his "adult" years, he grew out of needing his mother's attention and love, knowing that it was just a phase and she loved all her siblings. He made his own choices now, but he still loved and admired his mother greatly. He also made sure to spend more time with his siblings, even though the Blood Squad was usually his top priority. Komodo still occasionally went on diplomatic missions with his mother and siblings, able to see more Kingdoms such as the Sky Kingdom and others. He didn't really take an interest in the dragons there, but moreso the environment they lived in. Part of him was curious what the other Kingdoms looked like-what weather they got and how they hunted, but he refrained from ever asking about it. Komodo was never a scroll reader anyways, and he always liked hands-on experience better than reading from a book or scrolls. However, he did sometimes ask about the news, the Herald-wasn't it? And the current events going on. A lot of it seemed to be just random things, certain events that weren't really important to him or the Mud Kingdom. However, his entire mind shifted when he saw a certain article about the Alliance members, and what happened with the events of R'lyeh. Now, Komodo didn't really have an opinion on the Alliance. He was definitely not against them (they did help stomp out crime in the Sky Kingdom with Queen Ibis), but he also had no desire to join them, unlike his sister Moccasin. Though, upon further inspection, Komodo couldn't help but want to go to the Isle Mezzo to learn more about it. It seemed that the Isle Mezzo was constantly getting thrown into things, despite the Alliance being located there. He refrained from asking for a bit, knowing that he had to be careful when bringing it up. Besides, he wasn't even completely sure he wanted to leave the Mud Kingdom. He liked it here. However, upon noticing that a lot of younger members of the Blood Squad were leaving to attend the University or get a new change of pace, Komodo decided that it was time to ask. When he told his mother that he wanted to travel to the Isle Mezzo and live there for a bit, he made sure to promise a few things. He promised that he would keep his loyalties to the Mud Kingdom and the Mud Kingdom only, promising he wouldn't join the Alliance or become a trainee there. He also promised that he would return to the Mud Kingdom one day, and that he wouldn't stay there for too long, knowing that eventually he would have to return to be apart of the Blood Squad and help run the Kingdom. While at the Mezzo, he was also told to look after all the MudWings that had came there (mostly ones apart of the Blood Squad, but also the ones that where just apart of his tribe in general), mainly to make sure that they were kept safe. Komodo was also told to watch and observe(and sometimes fight) the dragons in the University and Alliance-mainly during sparring sessions so that he could learn how the members of the Alliance fought, and how to anticipate their moves/incorporate them into his own skills and tactics. Finally, the final promise he made was to try and make connections with the different, more important types of dragons on the Isle Mezzo. Dragons such as the other royals that were on the Isle, or dragons that were apart of the Alliance like Merlin and Cypress. He promised that he would try and get to speak to them if he ever got the chance, knowing that his future would call for it at times.
\\ R E L A T I O N S H I P S //
PARENTS >
Queen Salamander >> His mother, Queen of the MudWings, and someone Komodo loves with all of his heart. He admires her strong skills and her ideas, and he doesn't mind the fact that she has more than one mate. He finds his mother to be someone who he knows he can trust, and someone that Komodo will miss very dearly. He hopes she will be proud of him, one day.
Cranberry >> Although Cranberry is constantly busy with the Blood Squad and arguing with other male concubines, Komodo still really does love his dad. Maybe not to the same extent as he loves his mom, but it's still there. He appreciates that his father at least tries when it comes to his kids, and doesn't really get salty over the fact that he's not around as much.
SIBLINGS >
Princess Heron >> His sister, and the bigwings of his clutch, is quite the character. She's aggressive and erratic, with a constant need to fight-whether it be verbally or physically. Komodo finds her amusing to watch and talk to, and when she isn't bouncing off the walls crazy, she's quite a kind, albeit hyper, MudWing.
Prince Reed >> Reed is more of a reserved MudWing, not as hyper as his sister Heron, nor as passive aggressive as Komodo. He's kind and benevolent, towards the Blood Squad and towards non-bloodegg MudWings. Occassionally he'll get into an argument with either of his siblings, but he's usually not one to start them. At times, he'll even spar with Komodo if he really is up to it, but usually he sticks with watching.
Princess Mayfly >> Despite being the youngest out of all of them, Mayfly is usually either sparring or training by herself, usually trying to become stronger and faster than her siblings. She constantly insists on sparring with any of her siblings, wanting to see what to improve on and if she can finally beat any of them. She's a kind soul on the inside, but sooner or later her thoughts always turn back to fighting. Komodo loves her, but sometimes she can get on his last nerve by pestering him so much.
Prince Quagmire >> Despite being from different clutches, Komodo is familiar with the Prince and knows him well. He enjoys talking to his brother from time to time, and the two seem on relatively good terms with one another.
Princess Gharial >> Komdo doesn't know the princess all that well, only occasionally seeing her in the palace. He can't really say that they're on good terms, since they haven't really spoken to each other a lot, but he does wish to get to know her better.
Princess Moccasin >> Komodo is both curious and bewildered by her strange, passive nature. She seems the exact opposite of their mother, but Komodo doesn't try to blame that on her. He still wonders why she wouldn't be trying to become Queen, or why she would even want to join the Alliance at all. He loves her as a sister, but that doesn't stop him from not understanding her reasons or motives. He does feel kinda bad that he was allowed to go the Isle Mezzo and she wasn't, but he hopes that she can be happy in the Mud Kingdom.
Prince Bayou >> Komodo is neutral with his brother, not really disliking him, but not really liking him either. Komodo has really no opinion on his brother, but wonders if maybe one day that would change. For better or for worse.
Princess Jacana >> He and his sister, like many other siblings of Salamander's first clutch, are pretty okay/neutral with each other. He doesn't mind her company if she spends it with him, but he also can't really say much about her.
MATE (if applicable) > :alaskatyping:
DRAGONETS (if applicable) > :alaskatyping:
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POSITIVE RELATIONSHIPS
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NEUTRAL RELATIONSHIPS
Aedes > A fellow bloodsquad member who had left for the university. He doesn't know her well, but he wouldn't mind passing up a chance to speak with her more.
Cinnamon > Aedes 'sister', Cinnamon. He also doesn't know her well, but he is curious to know her. ;^)
Phoenix > A hybrid in the bloodsquad. All he really knows about her is that she has no wings.
NEGTIVE RELATIONSHIPS
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Brass Knuckles [2 SMALL OBJECTS] > A pair of brass knuckles, both for defense and fighting. Not often used, though Komodo is quite familiar with them.
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\\ E X T R A //
(Anything else such as voice canons, scent, link to RP tracker, etc. may go here!)
Bans - Royalty & Bloodegg! (Plus the too hot ban)
Scent - Mostly a vanilla scent, but a hint of Nutmeg is there too.
Voice Canon-
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Comments: 3
dracotheuke [2018-09-09 05:04:34 +0000 UTC]
I really enjoy the character! And there's really nothing I'd change about him ^^ I adore the design my only suggestion design wise is to test out cell shading? Airbrush shading makes komo look a bit dirty but he also looks like the sassy type that rolls around in dirt and fights in that case I like the airbrush shading but also add cell shading so it looks cleaner
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Snivymice In reply to dracotheuke [2018-09-09 14:02:33 +0000 UTC]
ahh thank you?? That’s so sweet that you like him! It took me awhile to find traits I like so it does mean a lot that you like him :^)).
Haha yeah, the coloring could be way better, along with literally everything about his look, but thank you for the advice and feedback. I’ll definitely take it into account if I ever want to redesign his application art!
Thank you again, you have no clue how kind your words are to me!
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dracotheuke In reply to Snivymice [2018-09-09 16:13:38 +0000 UTC]
No problem! I try to give constructive criticism and point out what I like and personality wise I'd change nothing he's perfect and the design again is perfect :3 I looked through your page and saw a lot improvement so overall it's 10/10 Oc in my opinion <3 and I'm glad I made you happy
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