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SnowEmbrace β Two Worlds, One Heart - Part 10
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Published: 2015-01-28 00:00:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 7648; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 50
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You have a model without any facials and you don't want to use it again 'cause it will look stupid in certain situations? Don't worry, just kill it.Βlol Poor Ursula
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I have to say that you turned Vanitas into an even more badass villain then he was in the Birth By Sleep, and in Birth By Sleep, he unleashed monsters fueled by his own negativity into every world in a plot to lure out Ventus and claim Kingdom Hearts. He had an endless army there, but in this, he's taking things a step farther to take control of the world. He killed Ursula. Talk about a plot twist. I hope you continue the story. If you feel the need to go back and organize your thoughts. I understand. It's important to plan things out when you write.
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Well, thank you! That sure means a lot.
I don't know if I'll ever go back to this story though... the more I look at it, the more I dislike how the comic came out :/
If I do go back to it, I'll probably revamp the entire thing. I just don't feel like continuing from here when all the previous parts look bad to me now.
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That's what it takes to create something great. You have to keep trying and keep redoing the work to get things right. I worked on chapter 1 of my own story for an entire year before I felt confident moving forward. I know there are lots of people who want to see this story finished, and I think you've done an awesome job. Sure, a few graphics could be better and the wrong words were used in a few places. However, you have a really awesome story that I would love to read. It feels like its own story. You've created an awesome villain, and once you figure out a plot and the little details, I know you'll have an awesome comic or at the very least an awesome story. Don't give up on your idea. I want to see how you would finish this story. I mean every word. You have an awesome story. If I can suggest something, take a break from it. Walk away and give yourself a chance to recover. Writing takes a lot of mental power, so give yourself the time you need. After you feel up for it, get down to the finer details of how you want the story to go and redo it. Honestly, you could write an incredible story with this. Like, the only thing I see in this is the names. If you changed the names and adjusted some details, I think you have the ground work for an awesome story. DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS.
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Yeah, that's exactly why I started to dislike this comic that much - in 2 years I've learned a lot concerning graphics, poses and stuff. I'm also italian so I know I misspelled some words here and there, and that irks me a lot too. My english definitely improved from 2014/early 2015 thanks to games, chats with native speakers, exams and stuff (can't say school has ever really helped with this).
I'm also more focused on the stories of my own original characters for now, so yet another reason to give up comics with KH characters ;-;
Thank you so much for your kind words, they really help and I know many people would want me to continue this, but I can't guarantee I will ever get back to this comic for now. I just don't feel inspired anymore and find it quite stupid even...
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Well, instead of creating a comic, why not write a story with your own characters that's similar to this.
Let's see.
A villain that kills the witch thinking she's manipulating him.
A merprince that becomes human to escape certain death from exile.
The merprince caught in a love triangle between a human girl and mermaid while oblivious to the mermaids feelings falls for the human girl.
The human girl has a friend she can trust the secret of the merprinces identity with because of his or her belief in stories.
The merprince has some close friends under the sea too that play a part.Β
You have the components to a great original story.
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I might take this idea in consideration 
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Absolutely. To be honest, he doesn't even have to be a prince. He could be an average merman too. It really is whatever you want. I need to finish homework, so I can work on my own story. I hope this helps.
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omg I'm in love with this story when are u going to make another one I'm wanting to find out more about this story its soooo awesome
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I'm sorry but I don't think I'll ever continue this story anymore...Β Β
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omg why I really love this story why would u just give up on it for if I may ask
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Because I lost interest in it :/ I wasn't really sure how to continue it and honestly I don't really like it anymore now. It just seems really crappy and I'd need to remake it all.
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well I though that u did a great job and that I thought that it was cute and I really loved it so much
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I don't know if I'll ever continue this comic since I'm dedicating myself to another one right nowΒ Β
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a story is like a bridge if you leave it unfinished user or in your case reader will suffer ( unfinished bridge collapses people get hurt, unfinished story makes people feel annoyed that this story has no ending ( please do not feel pressured if you can't I understand Im going though a should I start my story or not and since I have not started mine no harm no foul, If I offended you Im sorry) Β
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Yes I know very well how stories are, since I love writing and I already wrote loads of fanfictionsΒ Β But a comic is different, or at least in this case, because it started by a random idea without a real story behind it... so I don't really have an actual plot in mind and I just decided to stop it until I find the right inspiration to start working again on itΒ Β
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all right, fair enough (inspiration idea: Kairi gets a way of foiling Vaniatas which in turn in the long run convinces the king that kairi is one human that can be trusted and in explain how Kairi was able to transform to begin with. (just to help)
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Ha ha yup he is alright
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At first I was like: Why turning her into a human? You could nearly say that's a reward oΓ΄ But then I thought: Oh well, body- and lungcrushing is one of the most painful deaths, just like drowning, so why not 
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Amazing Chapter. I love how this story is going. Keep up the great work my friend
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