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Published: 2010-06-16 17:57:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 10281; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 37
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Wait for it..... wait for it.......... GO!
PLEASE IGNORE THE UGLY ART ON THIS PAGE. .___.
No serious, I hate this page :< Hated the sketch, hated doing it and hating the results. But now it's done so I don't care XD At least things will start happen now in the story c:
Urgh... yeah........ ffff oh and this will be the last you'll see of the young ones xD You won't see anything of them get away to safety but they do and I thought I should say that. |D So yeah, NO NEED TO WORRY ABOUT THEM C: Worry more about Core... :'< Fffff... I'll shut up now. |D
Designs/Characters © ~joejoeyjoy4 (Breeze), ~BloodMoonwolfcomic (Varian), ~Sutefu-Kasaichi (Roxas)
Art, Story and Characters © ~Snowwire
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Fff but.. but.. but ;o;
Aww thank you so much Sym ;v; I'm glad you like it ^^ <333
lol yes run XDDD
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NO BUTS!! >:3
Awww anytime Snow and I luff how it turned out. ;D <33333
LOL they better! xDD
Sorry for sending you many faves of your Atir comic, I just removed them and decided... how come there is no special section for "Atir's Story"? Cx So... BAM, there is one now!~~ 8D
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;3; <3333
Lol no need to apologies XD It just makes me happy c;
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;u; ~<33333
Gahhh okay then! xD
P.S. Did you see my journal? [link] (Just read the beginning, where you can find the new Zelda game trailer) Cx
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Lol I did see it 8D *that's how I found out about it* I'm just going through replys and comments and one BIG pile of art I got to look through XDDD So I haven't really been able to comment on it XD
BUT I'M SO DAMN EXICTED FOR IT 
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Epiccc! ;D <333 *lol that's great since some people didn't know about it, also because some people didn't have the E3 thing on their channel mostly the U.S. though x3* Gahhh probably an army of reply's and comments! Dx Lol and art! xD
Ohhh but if you get the chance comment if you can on any of my journals!~ Cx *dosen't mind*
LOLLLLL I'M MORE EXCITED FOR THE KID ICARUS ONE, SINCE I'M LIKE A BIG FAN and IF YOU DID READ MOST MY JOURNAL, YOU'LL SEE WHY!! 
I've been waiting for like 2 years for that new game and when I was watching my TV (since the E3 was a weeks ago, but I watched it when it came out, which is only one time) I was like waiting and waiting and finally... IT CAMEEE!
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Ah yes, I heard of the E3 ^^ but yeah, no we didn't have it on our channel XD
Heh I'll be sure to try ^^ Just getting a bit dizzy of all the art and journals |D
Lol yeah so I read XD haha though I don't really know that much of Icarus |D Only heard about him through SSBB and not very much either |D So I'm not really a fan. XD
But I'm glad for you that you finally git what you been waiting for! 8D
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Cool~ ;D Gahhh that stinks... v.v;
Okay, I'll be waiting for you and take your time! 
LOL same here, only in SSBB but I know his other game too, (he only has two I think, the new one and the very old one... /D) But the reason why I like him is simple... I think he looks like a cute character!
Yup! I've been waiting and waiting and I was sooo excited, and I like spazzed when I saw it on my TV! 8D <333333
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Haha yeah |D <333
Ohhh I see then ^^
Lol which games or you gonna get then? ;D
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Yup!~ xD <3
Yushhhh~ n.n
Kid Icarus Uprising and maybe Zelda Skyward Sword~ x3
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It looks wonderful! *Lets see who can get there first*
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Lol I suddenly got this picture of two sport commentators eagerly commenting on everyone that's running XD
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Ahhhh I'm so proud! c':! Your eye panel looks so much better!
And asdkjlsfds if you don't want this art I'll take it |D
It's so ~SUSPENSEFUL~!
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Yay! Thank you so much! ;v;
Hahah xD
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DD:! You are killing me with this story :<<
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Tehehe then all is going as planned >8DD Muahaha C:<
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DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:>! xDDDD ♥
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please dont let her die just have her like rreally badly hurt TT.TT
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Fffff you're making me feel more guilty ;3; Really wish I could, didn't thought I would grow attached to her. >^< But it will mess up the story and the story sort of changes Atir. ;3;
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but what if she like does not remember him or something after the incedint??? :0 I know I am so bad but I dont want Core to die D:
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Ffff how do you think I feel? D8< lol jk But yeah it actually could work but I think I'm still gonna go with how I intended 
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he totally has to find someone else D: I was starting to fall in love with Core and Atir DX
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Yeah he does ;3; I really didn't expect to like Core so much. When I made Atir I just knew everything about him and his past, and thus I knew he would lose his loved one. Then Core was just created I had no really attachment to her but then after all these pages... ;3; She just grew more to more >^<
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well if its essential to your story line then I geuss she has to go T^T
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Pfff this art is most definitely not ugly!
Yayy little ones get to safety!
But what of the lovely Core!
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But I could have done it better ;3;
*sniff* You'll get to see that in the next page :<
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Psh I think it looks great<3
Awww D: At least I won't be held in suspense for too long!
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Oh phew! Good to know the little ones will be all right....!!!...WAIT A MINUTE! WHAT DO YOU MEAN WORRY MORE ABOUT CORE?!
< o <
*looks at you suspiciously*
Great page by the way! :'3
The rain looks wonderful! The first panel is my fav~
<3
Can't wait for the next page!
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What? No *cough* I didn't say *cough* anything... >_> *looks away*
xD
Thank you! Glad you like it! c:
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RUN CORE, RUN
oh this just can't be good D;
I love all the action poses in the last panel 
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Thank you!
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Ohyes, action poses are always fun. X3 'specially in perspective. 8D
No problem~
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Awwwwww.
I love your artwork ever if you dislike ittt..... -hugz-
Anyways....... Run babeh bunniezzz!!!! (Even though I know you make it.)
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Awww thank you dear
Lol yes run! XD
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if i drew this i would call it gold cause THIS ART IS BEUTIFALL!
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Awww thank you ^^ But I really could have done it better ;3;
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your welcome ^^ i couldn't have ;_;
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Ah, finally, movement
Nice closeup on her eyes ^^
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Haha yes finally xD
Thank you
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Gooo fox! get the bad rabbit! >:U
Im happy to know the little ones survived 8D
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Ffff you are just saying that =^= Secretly you were hoping he would get them all, weren't you? =^= lol xD
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Nawww D: that would be sad!
And the little ones are specially cute !
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And....they're off at the biggest race of their lives. Oh so we have to worry about her? Um is foxy going to catch her and then I know Atir will save the day by stomping on his feet. 
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Haha oh yes xD *gasp* It's like you can see in to the future. 
Thank you!
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OH NOES! RUN RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!! RUN FOR THE CARROTS!!*trows many carrots on the rabbits home*RUUUUN!!!*kills the fox*MWAHAH! I SAVED YA
but still..RUN!!D8!
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