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Published: 2011-08-29 19:57:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 7777; Favourites: 154; Downloads: 20
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Stop talking like it's the end Core!
EDIT: Slight change in text.
I'm... not really happy with this page. :/ It's not super bad but I'm just... not satisfied with the final look. I just feel kinda... meh.
Which is annoying 'cause I liked the sketch of it. :cAnd I just noticed... I think I failed with all the ears in this page. Well at least Core's. |D I like to complain.
Let's see how many can see/remember what the last panel references too. ;D
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wow, that forth panel is stunning. the detail in it is so beautiful, i love this page! <3
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Thank you very much! ^^
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Wow the way you did her eye is perfect! It's like looking at an eye during the last moment's of someone's life, the emotion appears to be all gone but there's a tiny speck of life...Poor Core D:
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Bwaa ;A; Thank you ;3;
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YOU'RE WEWCOME : D
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TOUCH! TOUCH DX Why do you make such a sad story! D:
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I don't know! D: I'm sorry ;A;
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Awww, poor Core. I love her detailed eye! Beautiful work
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;3; Thank you very much!
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I like this page, I think it's just depressing seeing her die.
And her ears do to look good!
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Indeed. ;3;
Nah I think they are too far back on her head. :/
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THEY'RE BETTER THAN IF I DREW THEM!!!
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That fourth panel is one of the prettiest things I have ever seen.
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Awwwww 
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Wow I'm so into this comic x3 That eye close up looks amazing too! 8D
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Aww, glad you are! 
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Oh, oh, I think I know! Its this page --> [link] right?!! But I think the rabbit on this page are better. And I love CoreΒ΄s eyein fourth panel, it looks so real! I like the page where you draw rain, it makes them feel so sad and... itΒ΄s just so many emotions and feelings within them. Lovely.
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Heh yes, that's correct. And yeah, the rabbits are better here. That page was made more then a year ago. x'D
Thank you very much!
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Awww no~ don't cry. D'8
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LIVE LITTLE BUNNY GIRL LIVE!!!! I've seen a rabbit with an arrow through it's head survive...A little love bite on the neck is NOTHING GIRL!!! XD Such a sweet scene...and the rain just makes it that much more tragic! MUST KNOW HOW THIS ENDS MAN! and to add to the consensus, the eye shot IS gorgeous!
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Lol XD Yes, that was totally a love bite
Haha and thank you!
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