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Snowwire — Atir's Story part two- P41 END
Published: 2011-09-25 00:30:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 7930; Favourites: 247; Downloads: 24
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And then Atir turned forever emo. No really. He did.
There was going to be an "ahhh" speech bubble, showing that he screamed, but it just turned silly. I think you get that he is screaming.
For those saying "it wasn't his fault". Well actually... it partly was. Had he paid more attention or so... she might have lived. o^o
Well... the final page is done and submited. I do feel a little sad. ;3;
Thank you though for everyone that continued following this comic and for the support!
A better thank you is here: [link] and also some information about what I'll do now with comics for people who are interested.
ALSO, GO WATCH THIS ANIMATION ~Selsea012 DID: [link]
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Comments: 350
Haha, I guess. xD
But thank you very much for the kind words!
And I'm glad to hear you liked it. <3
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Wait, is this based on something and did I just make a rather bad comment? 8u
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Oh god. Just read through it and I'm utterly surprised by how much this "little" comic means to me now. Damnit, it's good! The drawings are well done, too - I'm out of words to tell you how much I like this... Definitely going to my faves! (going to fave the cover, and the page where the fox gets Core...)
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Aww haha, well I'm glad you like it that much!
I really appreciate it, thank you!
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You're very welcome - I believe it's my pleasure, I'm just going to give you kudos for the great work you've done. I'll run your gallery through eventually, give some feedback as a thank you ^^
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moremoremoremoremoremore. OMG MORE!
You just got yourself a new fan buddy. lol
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There is no more to this story though, but I'm glad you like it.
Thank you.
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Loved it. Just fantastic and tragic. The original Watership tale is one of my top five literary universes. Your illustrations portrayed the expansion of it fantastically.
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it.
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D'aw D8
I'm sorry you cried. ;n;
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That page made me cry for real 
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Thank you very much! 
I guess I do picture things like a film in my head when I draw comics.
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Aww, thank you very much.
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I love this story so much! I'll always remember it!
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Aww, thank you! I'm glad you think such. ;u;
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This is too good, It is NOT supposed to end, why DID IT END!?!?!
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Because that's how it's suppose to end. x'D Thank you though. c:
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This is beautiful and sad story. Well drawn.
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!
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gahsdagshdjha this comic was amazing to read through. ;-; The sad storyline is so saaaad and your artwork aaaa goes so well with it.
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Oh akjlkerjge thank you ver much. ;u; I'm glad you like it~
Also, thank you very much for the watch!
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Aww, I'm sorry. ;3; But also glad that would want to see more. ;u;
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I adore your comic, I really do but I gotta say one thingey..
Maybe it will even be more touching if we saw more before her dead and stuff. we only saw a little part of the past. If we knew how much he loved her this would be even more sad... well, if that's what we want xD
Love your comic and art anyway
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Indeed, it would probably be more sad to see her die if one would have seen more of her before it.
But when I decided to make the comic, it was only for practice. I didn't care that much to make it perfect or to make sure people would get the right feelings or such. And Core was, in the beginning of everything, never a character I had thought much about or cared of, all of my focus was on Atir. xP
What you say is true though and I really do agree with you.
Thank you kindly.
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Ah I understand 
No problem ~
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I don't know how old this story is but I love it! I hope you make more of it. :3
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Thank you! The story has ended now though, so I won't make any more of it.
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Snap. x3 Okay that's fine. ^^
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Why are people so mean to their characters? ;n; This.. this made me cry. Poor Atir D: All he wanted was some love, and it's partly Core's fault for telling him that all was safe and everything, and just 'OOOOOHHH RELAXX' when, wham, you die D: I think page 40 made me tear up the most, but the artwork was beautifully done and the story beautifully executed. Sad to see a good thing end, but an amazing ending it was~
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I didn't think I would feel so bad with killing Core when I started the comic, but now I do. ;n;
Thank you for the kind comment~
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I have to say, this is the best comic-style story I've read on deviantart! I absolutely loved it...it was just fabulous.
And yes, I was crying at the end.
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Oh my.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it!
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Oh god, I'm thinking of the scene I saw on YouTube from Crisis Core or whatever that game is where Cloud screams... it fits. D:
Time to draw some emo Atir fanart.
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Heh don't really know what game you're speaking of~ owo;
Awwww~ <3
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Fft I'm so late on reading this, but you made me cry ;^; I love this, too bad there will be no more.
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Awww ;w; I'm glad you liked it though! And thanks for reading it~
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Oh no problem at all, I loved that it was rabbits instead of wolves or cats like it is normally, it was quite a refreshing change <3
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