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blackeyedbirdy [2007-02-28 00:14:51 +0000 UTC]

Nice theme here, the pink outfit and furturistic boots mimic the skull graphic and pixelated text in the back drop! Adds a lot, good job. You've also got a knack for folds and most of your contures are really accurate!
Critique: The legs seem to be a tad too thick, and I think the section from the waist up should be a bit more elongated. In addition, her shoulders, I think should be a little more defined, and the left one (although in perspective) should be visible.
Despite those, it's a great piece. Forgot to mention how I really like the soft brown you used for both skin and hair; very nice!

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qahthrrynne [2007-02-23 02:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'll agree with Brad on the neck being a bit too wide. And I think there's something a bit wonky about the eye, though I'm not sure what. But beyond that, I really like this! It's got a pretty realistic balance, in terms of the body and the shape. Also, the outfit is adorable! I love it!

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igaara [2007-02-22 03:30:01 +0000 UTC]

mmm ok her tatoo is on the rong side her pelvis looks a fair bit bigger then the rest of her her neck is to wide and her left legs look a bit to thick and her one arme that you can complety see is a fair on the thin side

aside from all that i think its a pretty good picture keep it up... oh and next time can you send me the line right to the page if you want criticism

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padfootmoony-grl [2007-02-21 01:56:06 +0000 UTC]

The left arm is oddly thin compared to the rest of the body structure? Also, the left foot seems bent a little too far to the side or something...

Anyway. I don't mind being drawn as a 'whore' Lol XD After all, the book did call me a Lying Manipulative Whore! XD I like it, and you actually made pink work with me. I'd actually WEAR that XD With pants, mind you... Lol. <3 it. Vury cool! Who's next? XD

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