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Published: 2016-04-19 16:10:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 529; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Description An arttrade with a friend ::: ) 

My OC Loris and their(www.breakaneck.tumblr.com )C Yre
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Comments: 4

aprilharee [2016-04-19 17:26:27 +0000 UTC]

I like the colors and atmosphere!!   Except I would recommend working on your anatomy and lighting.  The underwear looks like it's glowing which is stealing focus away from the characters' faces. 

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So-u-l In reply to aprilharee [2016-04-19 18:14:23 +0000 UTC]

well...I think I wanted the focus on all important parts :  D  Can you specify by anatomy? 

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aprilharee In reply to So-u-l [2016-04-19 18:32:47 +0000 UTC]

By anatomy, I meant like the proportions of the figures. For example the black haired guy's shoulders look off. One shoulder is all the way to the left while the other is all the way to the right. And the black haired guy's arm isn't foreshortened well.  Also the perspective needs work. For example the feet should be bigger since it is closer to the viewer.  Sorry for rambling... But I hope you improve

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So-u-l In reply to aprilharee [2016-04-19 18:37:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...I had problems drawing the black haired. Since never drew  that pose. And about the feet, yeah, actually haven't thought about that : D  thans for the feeeed :::: )

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