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Published: 2017-11-01 22:07:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 685; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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<<[PREVIOUS] |[NEXT]>>pls don't roast me I am so bad at fight scenes and I know Raven's powers up there could have been better executed but there's only so much I'm willing to do per page for now
BB turning into a freaking DINOSAUR in a TINY PRISON CELL is another one of those "this has been in since the early concept days and is getting shoe-horned in logistics be damned". Not even remotely sorry.
~ Sheep xx
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... B .... .... B don't... you're stressing me out, son. taking a bite out of a demon is a good way to go getting yourself possessed or something, i just... BB ... *gently pats his back along with raven* you get a gold star for trying... i guess. don't ever do that again.
did the demon have four eyes before or is it only taking on that appearance because it's facing raven??? i genuinely can't remember if it's had 4 eyes before ... i don't think it has??? don't go gettin' ideas from trigon, you swirly little punk, that's a BAD THING.
also, mumbo, lmao, acknowledging it's a demon and this might... MIGHT have been a really bad idea because it doesn't care about the 'how'. a bit late to the boat, aren't we, my dude. i swear to heck. you're all stressing me out. someone drop-kick this thing back where it came from, or so help me.
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A gold star for trying is something! :'D But yeah, BB won't be doing THAT again. Ha. haaa.... nope.
Bro, good catch! This IS the first time the demon has had four eyes and it deeeeefinitely did that on purpose for Raven 
Lol and let's be real: Mumbo's life plan has not been the best to date. <:I He is not the smartest cookie in the jar it would seem. He has his reasons, sure, but boy are they bad.
~ Sheep xx
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BRUH I don't even know how to do actiony poses that look like action poses yet and i can barely write fight scenes so you are FINE it looks great. also BB just eating the demon as a trex in the tiny prison cell is A+ that is exactly how to do the thing
i love it so much girl cant wait to see how they kick mr. dealer demon's ass once and for all!!
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Ahhh so long as it's fine it's fine for now at least!! : D;;; Hnng thank you Linz <3
Also your comment about "BB just eating the demon as a trex in the tiny prison cell is A+ that is exactly how to do the thing" is the best phrased comment ever I love you I want that tattooed on my body >xD
~ Sheep xx
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It's alright if your fight scenes aren't exactly polished, there's always room for improvement in the future. I would recommend looking at action sequences in various comic book panels so that you can get a good sense and idea of how you want to portray the action in your panels when you illustrate them.
I still think you're doing a great job with this, and even though the whole thing with Beast Boy turning into a dinosaur in a small area may not be logical, I still think you did a good job with illustrating it in the panel, and it was pretty funny with him spitting out the demon after trying to contain it in his mouth. As always, keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see the next page.
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Oh yeah man, I definitely could do with referencing some more action sequences already in comic books. That is a superb idea and definitely something I'll try to do in future!
Thank you again for your encouragement and wonderful words. All of your comments have made me so happy!!
~ Sheep xx
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Beast Boy's face in the penultimate panel just shrieks, "Me no likey!" 
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Hahaa, yeah, can't imagine that a demonic entity tastes all that good xD Poor Beast Boy finding that out the hard way...
~ Sheep xx
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