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Socks-and-Notebooks — Cracked Walls pg. 1
Published: 2010-06-23 19:32:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1297; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 25
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And so it begins. Props to Muff for helping me with the title....It's supposed to be raining in the third panel. >:I
Also, something I've decided. I'm gonna try to make this comic romance-free, with the exception of Bliss and her girlfriend Lani, but they're side characters anyway. So no, BellsxFlynn isn't canon. But hey, I can ship too.
Tata for now, folks.
All characters, art, story, etc. (c) to ~Socks-and-Notebooks
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Hi. I don't care. Don't call me that.
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I,am sorry!
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Why does that one person look like Lil? D':
I'm assuming that this is before she's with Lil and Yev, right? Cause she's stealing food?
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Mwah. Take a guess.
Yep. This is right before she meets Lil, actually.
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Her dad? Her brother? D':
I wonder if Lil killed them... :'0
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...Obviously, I fail at femininity.
Mwah. Ha. Ha. C:<
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Obviously, I fail at not bothering to look at the panel again and trying to recollect what it looked like using only my fail memory.
AU NAAAAUUUU
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Gorgeous expressions as usual. <3
That third panel is great. I had no problem at all telling that it was raining.
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Dang, Bells' expression in the third panel is awesomes!
Cliffhanger? O:
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OH MY GOODNESS IS THAT LIL'S FAMILY OMG NOOOOOO. D:
No BellsXFlynn? NOOOOOOOO- *shot*
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She finds DEAD PEOPLE.
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skjdsknjksa
CLIFFHANGER DARN YOU ELENA
Irregardless, though, I really respect you for doing this. Comics. Are. Hard. D:
I'd recommend some more dynamic perspective though. The poses are pretty expressive but if you had the panel where Bells falls in some dynamic perspective it'd look fantastic. Like the final panel where it's bird's eye view. It draws your eye to it.
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Awesome~~ I love all the actionness and angles and poses and asdfghjkl what a great opening. You're so great at comics. I can only wait for how the story continues on from here~
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AND SO IT BEGINS!!
Let me say, from what I've seen of Team Amulet, your art have improved by A LOT. I love how you made the narration on the computer so it stands out from the rest of the comic. I doubt I would have thought of something like that. XD
But I sure can't wait for the next page.
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T-the cut-in word panels...they're so perfect! I'm getting a noir-esque vibe already. Awesome. Fabulous work, can't wait to see more.
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jasbgbkaoialkb I LOVE IT ALREADY ;A; <3
Ffff, no BellsxFlynn canon? THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE, I SAY.
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I'm glad. :3
Hey, look on the bright side. This means you can ship Bellsie and Lil if you want. C:< *shot*
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Ohohoho, Indeed I can xD
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