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"No. L-L-L-Le-Le-Le-Le-Let me explain. No. You don't understand. No! I didn't mean for... No, No! Look, I m sorry I called you... No! NOO!"The roaring fire and the manic laughter from the hyenas quickly drowned out the cries and screams from any onlookers. Likewise the smoke hid them all and as the clan fell on the lion, three hyenas in particular walked slower towards the scene. It was almost as if they were waiting for the rest to do the dirty work.
Shenzi led the way for the other two, safely guiding them through the flames. Then she came to a sharp stop as her eyes fell on the violence. She assumed it would have been all over at this point, but her smirk faded as two piercing green eyes locked onto her own. Hyenas swarmed over the lion and it seemed as if he'd given up the fight. The bloodshed was immense and the clan was in a frenzy, trying to get at as much as they could before the flames became too unbearable.
"Traitor," Banzai muttered as he came to stand next to Shenzi, but his voice faded as his gaze drifted to his former friend.
Ed looked at his two companions in confusion. Weren't they going to join in the feast? Food? Wait. Wasn't Scar their friend? Wait, that's right. He betrayed them. Food! Wait. Friend? Food. Friend. Food. Friend. ?!?!
Scar was slipping in and out of consciousness; his vision blurred...would he see Mufasa soon? Was there any chance of redemption...forgiveness for his sins? Was any of it worth it...did any of it matter anymore. With his last ounce of strength he stretched his paw out towards the trio, as if in a last desperate plea. They were, after all, the closest things to friends that he'd ever had...at least at one point in time. Why didn't they listen, let him explain? His mouth hung open in ragged gasps as he choked on his own blood, "...please..."
Shenzi took a step back, almost frightened. For an instant she didn't see Scar anymore. She didn't see the lion that had used and betrayed them, the lion she'd come to hate. Instead she saw the awkward little cub that had helped her all those years ago. The only lion she had ever trusted. The only lion she had ever dared to call friend.
"Taka...." she whispered through the noise; lowered her gaze as the light left his eyes. "I'm sorry."
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Alright...I think this is the most violent, and utterly friggin depressing, thing I've ever drawn or written.
PS: I dunno if this needs a mature warning or not...feh. XD If someone's that offended then I'll slap one on, just lemme know. I don't think it's THAT bad...or is it? lol
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Bencebala [2023-03-15 11:19:21 +0000 UTC]
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eta-gamma-14 [2022-08-19 13:39:18 +0000 UTC]
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MagicalHyena-FanArt [2019-05-30 00:48:01 +0000 UTC]
Shenzi didn't know Scar had called her and her friends an enemy.
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SocksTheMutt In reply to MagicalHyena-FanArt [2019-05-30 01:35:37 +0000 UTC]
Shenzi (along with Banzai and Ed) overheard Scar call the hyenas the real enemy. It's what caused them to turn on him in the end.
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scarandsimbafight [2015-09-02 00:43:05 +0000 UTC]
scar..scar! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HYENAS WILL DIE FOR THAT INCLUDING SIMBA AND MUFASA no I'm serious
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PatchestheCalico [2012-04-23 11:39:30 +0000 UTC]
Aww, this is the one and only scene in the movie that illicits a physical sickness response from me. :C I always hoped that at least since they betrayed him that the flames consumed them all.
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SocksTheMutt In reply to PatchestheCalico [2012-04-23 13:25:17 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I always assumed the hyenas got away myself (especially since in Simba's Pride Nuka (I think it was Nuka - haven't watched SP in years) mentions how the hyenas "ran off") I may write an alternative to this where Scar escapes, cause I just about cried while I wrote this one (and while I drew the picture too), pathetic as that is XD I think this scene was the most violent and tragic in the movie, even worse than the stampede. For Mufasa, at least, it would have been all over quick...a fall that high, I feel we would have went out like a light when he hit the ground. Scar was well...eaten, by the only creatures he might have ever considered friends. That would have been slow and agonizing in more ways than one. Not even the baddest of villains deserves that, violent Disney...violent. D;
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PatchestheCalico In reply to SocksTheMutt [2012-04-23 14:01:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm wondering how long they stuck around once those flames came up. It's alluded in books and everything that apparently he disappeared in their guts in minutes. Yeah, he did horrible things but he didn't deserve to go like that... ;.;
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SocksTheMutt In reply to PatchestheCalico [2012-04-23 15:05:03 +0000 UTC]
I like to think he got away somehow...even if they made it pretty clear that he didn't in Simba's Pride (I have enough issues with SP that I can choose to ignore it anyway XD) There were quite a few hyenas...he'd have been no match for all of them together, the only chance I think would be if the flames/heat from the fire became too much for them to stand and they backed off for their own safety. Of course then we have to wonder how Scar himself would escape the flames, after being seriously wounded by the hyenas. Situation doesn't look good, unless someone like Patches came long of course lol! I have to think on this though...
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PatchestheCalico In reply to SocksTheMutt [2012-04-23 15:24:34 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's always nice to think that. I have issues with SP as well. It was pretty poorly written, executed and explained. My story I wrote completely ignores it as it should be. X3
If you look at the scene where the hyenas attack Simba, he has about as many on him as Scar would have had so you have to really wonder, after they'd fought and taken a beating, just how much energy they had left in them. If Simba could have survived it when they had their full strength, how could Scar not have? Granted Simba had some help, but go to the scene where they all leap on him. He's got a bunch on him for a while there before the lionesses help out.
I just prefer to think that Patches snatches him up and he vanished from the sight of all. XD
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SocksTheMutt In reply to PatchestheCalico [2012-04-23 16:21:31 +0000 UTC]
That's true, but Scar was also weakened at that point...after just being thrown over the cliff, I imagine that had to do a fair amount of damage. Plus he was much older than Simba, and always physically weaker anyway. D: I think the fire scaring the hyenas away would be his best chance...unless the main trio changed their minds and helped him (Shenzi being the clan leader could have called them off) but somehow I doubt that would have happened. It's a fun theory to think about though.
And of course I know you prefer to have Patches come save him XD
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PatchestheCalico In reply to SocksTheMutt [2012-04-23 16:46:10 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, he did seem to be in okay shape after having gotten up from that fall though. I don't think Disney ever meant there to be much in the way of doubts as to what was to happen though. It was meant to be poetic. Fun to theorize about like you said though.
I can't remember but did I ever share the link to the story I wrote?
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SocksTheMutt In reply to PatchestheCalico [2012-04-23 19:15:46 +0000 UTC]
Yup you sent me the link to your Patches/Scar fic (this first part anyway) over on FA about a month ago, loved it
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PatchestheCalico In reply to SocksTheMutt [2012-04-23 19:23:40 +0000 UTC]
Ok. I couldn't remember if I had or not. X3 I'm starting to plug away on the second part now actually, but it's slooow going. I have the outline for it done, but I keep having inspirational moments where things keep changing. XD
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SocksTheMutt In reply to PatchestheCalico [2012-04-23 19:50:24 +0000 UTC]
I know that feeling XD I've rewritten my own fan fiction so many times, and I keep backtracking to change things...then I get inspired to do another scene that happens in the future or something and get distracted again from where I was XD Ah well, it's fun!
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Mr-Scarlet-Nokitsune In reply to PatchestheCalico [2012-04-23 19:27:14 +0000 UTC]
You have a FA account?
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PatchestheCalico In reply to Mr-Scarlet-Nokitsune [2012-04-23 19:42:44 +0000 UTC]
I do, but I don't post anything there. It's just a watching account.
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Mr-Scarlet-Nokitsune In reply to PatchestheCalico [2012-04-23 19:58:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh I thought you had a story.
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PatchestheCalico In reply to Mr-Scarlet-Nokitsune [2012-04-23 20:03:13 +0000 UTC]
I do but it's really only a draft and I haven't publicly released it.
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