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Okay, I’m making this Corbin’s official design. Honestly, I’m kinda glad how this one turned out. Corbin is a bird, a crow specifically. I didn’t draw him with a beak at all the last time I drew his design, cuz the first time I did it, I kinda went about it wrong. For a while, I drew him like this;

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And before that, there was this;

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And before that, there was this(the failed beak);

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I couldn’t do it anymore..... So I had to get some references from some pictures of OCs just to draw him the way I wanted the first time, and I’m glad I did.

Though at the same time, I’m not totally sure about this design. I mean, I still like it and prefer it, but I feel like I could do something a bit more with it. He’s not just a normal bird, he’s part of the Goetia family (the son of Raum). And as someone who is special, I feel like I should do more with his appearance.

Also, I’m still deciding on what I should do about his character (like his personality, his story, and his background). He’s pretty dry when it comes to his personality. Doesn’t show much emotion on his face, not even in his voice. Almost like he’s just un-caring about everything and is very moody and mellow all the time. Basically, your typical goth dude. Though he is a cool young man once you get to know him. He’s also Octavia’s love interest, so there’s that too.

As I said, he’s the Son of Raum. Raum is the Great Earl of Hell and the 40th spirit of Ars Goetia. He rules the thirty legions of Demons. I guess he’s not as powerful as Stolas since Princes outrank Earls apparently. Though at this point, I’m convinced Stolas isn’t as strong as he’s made out to be. The only time he decides to be strong in the show is when Viv says so. But still, Raum is a very powerful and intelligent man.

Corbin is the oldest of 4 children and was personally trained by his father to be the next Earl. Though Corbin gradually does turn out to be strong, smart, and almost talented like his father by the age of 17, he doesn’t care at all to take his father’s place. He’d much prefer to live his life in hell and play music (this sounds cliche, but just bear with me, lol!) Raum argues one day with his son that if he won’t follow in his footsteps, then he shouldn’t live in the mansion anymore, and probably cut ties with the family. And that’s what Corbin did.

He stayed with his first girlfriend for a while but broke up with her after she was found in her bed with another guy and left. He eventually met with Trixie (the imp clinging to his arm) and befriended her after a few days. One day, Trixie heard him singing and fell in love with his voice. He told her he had nowhere to live and she was quick to offer him an invite to live in her home as a roommate. The two now live as roommates.

That’s about the gist of it. I say I like what I did with his story. Still, I would love to hear some good critiques and see what you guys think. Do you think I can change some things about him? Anything I need to improve on perhaps? Is he fine the way he is? I don’t intend to change too much.

Description

Okay, I’m making this Corbin’s official design. Honestly, I’m kinda glad how this one turned out. Corbin is a bird, a crow specifically. I didn’t draw him with a beak at all the last time I drew his design, cuz the first time I did it, I kinda went about it wrong. For a while, I drew him like this;

www.deviantart.com/soleilnelso…

www.deviantart.com/soleilnelso…

www.deviantart.com/soleilnelso…

And before that, there was this;

www.deviantart.com/soleilnelso…

www.deviantart.com/soleilnelso…

And before that, there was this(the failed beak);

www.deviantart.com/soleilnelso…

I couldn’t do it anymore..... So I had to get some references from some pictures of OCs just to draw him the way I wanted the first time, and I’m glad I did.

Though at the same time, I’m not totally sure about this design. I mean, I still like it and prefer it, but I feel like I could do something a bit more with it. He’s not just a normal bird, he’s part of the Goetia family (the son of Raum). And as someone who is special, I feel like I should do more with his appearance.

Also, I’m still deciding on what I should do about his character (like his personality, his story, and his background). He’s pretty dry when it comes to his personality. Doesn’t show much emotion on his face, not even in his voice. Almost like he’s just un-caring about everything and is very moody and mellow all the time. Basically, your typical goth dude. Though he is a cool young man once you get to know him. He’s also Octavia’s love interest, so there’s that too.

As I said, he’s the Son of Raum. Raum is the Great Earl of Hell and the 40th spirit of Ars Goetia. He rules the thirty legions of Demons. I guess he’s not as powerful as Stolas since Princes outrank Earls apparently. Though at this point, I’m convinced Stolas isn’t as strong as he’s made out to be. The only time he decides to be strong in the show is when Viv says so. But still, Raum is a very powerful and intelligent man.

Corbin is the oldest of 4 children and was personally trained by his father to be the next Earl. Though Corbin gradually does turn out to be strong, smart, and almost talented like his father by the age of 17, he doesn’t care at all to take his father’s place. He’d much prefer to live his life in hell and play music (this sounds cliche, but just bear with me, lol!) Raum argues one day with his son that if he won’t follow in his footsteps, then he shouldn’t live in the mansion anymore, and probably cut ties with the family. And that’s what Corbin did.

He stayed with his first girlfriend for a while but broke up with her after she was found in her bed with another guy and left. He eventually met with Trixie (the imp clinging to his arm) and befriended her after a few days. One day, Trixie heard him singing and fell in love with his voice. He told her he had nowhere to live and she was quick to offer him an invite to live in her home as a roommate. The two now live as roommates.

That’s about the gist of it. I say I like what I did with his story. Still, I would love to hear some good critiques and see what you guys think. Do you think I can change some things about him? Anything I need to improve on perhaps? Is he fine the way he is? I don’t intend to change too much.