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SolinaBright — Cold Run

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My Entry for the Winter Edition of  WorldEquestrianGames !


   

 

Horse: Falada Maxima

Ref Sheet:solinabright.deviantart.com/ar…

Horse's Breed Type: Horse

Event: Endurance

Rider: Adriana Green

Name of Stable: Green Frost Ranch

 

STORY:

The air is buzzing with excitement, but all Adriana and Maxima could feel is nervousness. For this is their first race. Adriana takes in a deep breathe and exhales to calm her nerves, the cold wasn't helping. She began to shiver, feeling goose bumps crawl down her arms and to her legs. Only the hope of finishing the race can warm her frozen limbs once more. She is pacing in front of Maxi's stall, who is already tacked up and ready to run. The mare can see that her master is acting odd, which makes the mare even more excited. She stomps her hooves in anticipation, catching Adri's attention. Realizing that her mood is affecting her horse, she takes in another deep breath and leans against the stall. This time beginning to tap her foot, she catches herself and stands still. Adri hates waiting, as does her impatient horse. 

 The stable has happy chatter ringing through it from other riders tacking their horses and making small talk. Some appear relaxed and other riders are trying too hard to look calm. Adriana witnesses what everyone else is doing, and wonders how they can look so calm. If she were to smile at this exact moment, she knows the muscles in her cheeks would spaz. She sees the attire everyone else is wearing and hopes she looks ok as she scratches at the stain on her shirt left there from breakfast. Hearing hooves clop on the brick floor, Adriana notices that racers were heading out for the race. "Where is John?" She says to the watchful horse, who replied with a shake of her mane. "He's normally sooooooo punctual. Where on earth can he be? Doesn't he know he's killing my nerves right now?" Adri complains as she throws her arms out to the air dramatically.  

Suddenly she hears nails clipping against the floor, followed by light panting, and is discovered by Dagger. Adri's youngest dog, a Belgian malinois who's divine duty is to be her master's support team. "How did you find me, you adorable dog you?" Adri wonders. "She followed her nose" replies John, whose standing behind his dog. Smiling. "I couldn't find you so I figured Dagger would do better. How you feeling?" He says while looking at his wife, realizing that he didn't need an answer. He knows how she's feeling. Terribly nervous. "Relax" he tells her "its your first race, you don't have to win. Just cross that finish line" He says to her as he gives her a warm, soft hug and continues, "But winning is good too" He gives her a small smile, and tries not to overstep on Adri's nerves (that lash out if teased too much). John's phone began to ring, "Seems like that's our cue to head to the starting line, besides... Maxi looks a bit antsy" he says to soften the mood. And they walk out to meet the race.

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 Cold air is stinging Falada's face as she charges straight forward, giving her body a boost of energy. Her rider gently pulls the reins back, reminding the horse that the race isn't about sprinting. Maxima snorts in understanding, this is what all the training sessions were about. They are cantering through flat land with sparse trees and quickly reaching a steep rocky hill. By the time they reach the base of the hill, Falada was directed to trot. And the pair gracefully travel up the first hill. At the top of the hill, it was easy to see that the afternoon is bringing clouds to a once clear sky. Continuing their journey, they enter a forest. Maxi is currently in a good pace, cantering. As the horse moves her legs gracefully, she inhales the new scents the forest has to offer. She recognized a canine scent, but it didn't exactly smell like the dogs from the ranch. She also smells other horses that have already passed this way. Falada is awoken from her scent distraction from a couple pats on her moist neck. "Your doing so good Falada" Adri says to encourage her horse. The mare can feel that her rider is no longer nervous, but rather is enjoying the ride.  Just like when they were training.

After quickly descending another hill safely, the team sees that they are going to cross a river. The sky has clouds that are dropping some light flurries, leaving some snow on the ground. Adri notices that there is a whitetail deer having a drink. It appears to be in shock or just curious, as the horse splashes lightly through the water. The water is quite cold, especially for sweaty bodies. But its temperature did not stop the pair from continuing their journey. Adri can hear the voice of an eagle ringing through the air, giving the atmosphere a magical feeling.  Falada's hooves gently pound the cold floor, her breaths are even. The wind plays with her mane, giving the mare natural peace. Both horse and rider are empowered. Each hoof step is delivered with direct confidence. They are not tired, but eager to finish this race. And so they begin their last mile, passing through a lake, with a stream or two following it. All the way until the team finish their very first endurance race.

 

FIN 
 Word Count: 883 according to Microsoft word


White Tailed Deer Reference: www.deviantart.com/art/White-T…

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Horse and Rider Reference: www.deviantart.com/art/Show-Ju…

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Comments: 33

LuDa-Stock [2015-04-03 21:34:01 +0000 UTC]

BEAUTIFUL!!! So many detais... can't stop looking at it

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SolinaBright In reply to LuDa-Stock [2015-04-06 03:33:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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SomersetRaven [2014-11-22 12:01:25 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! Everything looks so real! The shading, the background, fantastic!
If I did have one tiny critique it would be that no-one appears to have a shadow

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SolinaBright In reply to SomersetRaven [2014-11-23 02:14:30 +0000 UTC]

I understand what you mean. XD Thank you so very much! Your comments are such a pleasure to read.

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SomersetRaven In reply to SolinaBright [2014-11-23 12:47:32 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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Royalitie [2013-12-07 02:20:52 +0000 UTC]

I seriously almost believed that this was a photo..

Then I realised it was just your AMAZING Artistic Talent! <3



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SolinaBright In reply to Royalitie [2013-12-07 02:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Awww shucks!! You are so nice! Thank you so much!

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Royalitie In reply to SolinaBright [2013-12-07 02:52:55 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome <3

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Bearzoi [2013-12-04 21:27:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow, from the thumbnail, this looks like a photo!

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SolinaBright In reply to Bearzoi [2013-12-05 11:59:56 +0000 UTC]

That is so sweet! Thank you ever so much!

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nypd [2013-12-03 19:29:46 +0000 UTC]

i..i cant..i just..i just...


youre selling your art now, right?

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SolinaBright In reply to nypd [2013-12-05 11:58:56 +0000 UTC]

You can't just ? sweeeeeet. I really wish I was! But I don't sell me art... I wouldn't even know how to price things. I really want to though.. Maybe you could give me a few tips? Please?

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nypd In reply to SolinaBright [2013-12-07 04:18:04 +0000 UTC]

well, i dont really sell my own art much currently, but i plan on fixing that. a bunch of art friends i have are either already selling, or working on getting to selling their art stuff. ill message you with the tips -IVE- gotten from people who are selling regularly, though!

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SolinaBright In reply to nypd [2013-12-07 04:36:29 +0000 UTC]

ooooooooo! That would be very kind of you! Pretty please! That's greatly appreciated! Then one day, we both shall sell our art! Muahahaha!!

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SammyTheFloof [2013-12-03 02:11:38 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!

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SolinaBright In reply to SammyTheFloof [2013-12-03 07:47:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly!

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ArtofBekSutton [2013-12-03 01:57:34 +0000 UTC]

The detail in this is sensational. I thought it was a photo when i saw this in my inbox. Amazing stuff

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SolinaBright In reply to ArtofBekSutton [2013-12-03 07:47:32 +0000 UTC]

Awww! Thank you ever so kindly dearest! You are so sweet!

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Jag6201 [2013-12-02 19:51:36 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautiful! 

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SolinaBright In reply to Jag6201 [2013-12-02 23:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly!

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Rikkanna [2013-12-02 18:27:08 +0000 UTC]

This is just stunning!

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SolinaBright In reply to Rikkanna [2013-12-02 23:22:39 +0000 UTC]

That's so nice! Thank you dear!!

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Rikkanna In reply to SolinaBright [2013-12-03 01:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Only the truth. You're welcome!

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Flockey [2013-12-02 16:39:19 +0000 UTC]

wow! it's amazing!

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SolinaBright In reply to Flockey [2013-12-02 23:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Thankies deary!

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Flockey In reply to SolinaBright [2013-12-04 16:18:35 +0000 UTC]

no problem
Love it really^^

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MissDudette [2013-12-02 15:58:47 +0000 UTC]

BEAUTIFUL work, love those trees!

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SolinaBright In reply to MissDudette [2013-12-02 23:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly dear! That means so much to me!

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MissDudette In reply to SolinaBright [2013-12-03 01:09:16 +0000 UTC]

Well it's true!

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Ariukas [2013-12-02 15:33:46 +0000 UTC]

IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL  

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SolinaBright In reply to Ariukas [2013-12-02 15:56:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you deary! That means a ton!

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Sky-The-Pony [2013-12-02 13:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow! An amazing piece here full of detail and color, and an amazing mini story to add to it! That takes skills! Love the eagle/bird flying in the background. That's a nice touch and really adds life to the scene. (As if the horse, rider, and deer didn't do enough already ) Amazing work, Sols! Keep up the good work! :3

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SolinaBright In reply to Sky-The-Pony [2013-12-02 13:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you skyler! Yay for mini story! (believe me, it felt like I was typing a novel ) I will do my best, its nice reading from you!

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