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solja2k5 — A boy to his friend...
Published: 2006-05-29 18:42:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 361; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 19
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Description Start your rants.
Laugh when I dance.
Feed me ants.
Rip my pants.

Steal my booze.
Step on my shoes.
Mock me when,
I sing the blues.

Lie to my mother.
Hurt my brother.
Curse at my pa.
Flirt with the others

Kill my daughter.
Kill my son.
Take my life.
Call it done.

And even when
I meet my end.
I'll hold you close,
for you called me Friend.
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Comments: 11

UltimateAgent [2008-01-12 00:03:55 +0000 UTC]

Very good. It is kind of sad. It kinda matches the song I'm listening to as I type. I'll be watching you...

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haiku-loves-yuri [2006-06-19 00:29:18 +0000 UTC]

lol what you speak is true
like it

-Lanny

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solja2k5 In reply to haiku-loves-yuri [2006-06-20 14:43:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you s'much.

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dryadfae [2006-06-01 01:35:40 +0000 UTC]

i must say. seemed like something one would read in west indian poetry

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solja2k5 In reply to dryadfae [2006-06-01 12:17:12 +0000 UTC]

west indian...hmm. thanks

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Benevolin [2006-05-30 01:51:27 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I was getting ready to cry at that ending!! It's so true, and so so so so SAD.

VERY well written!

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solja2k5 In reply to Benevolin [2006-05-30 12:45:30 +0000 UTC]

*so embarassed*


Thank you

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nikeetah [2006-05-29 19:25:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow. that is so true....
good job

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solja2k5 In reply to nikeetah [2006-05-29 23:00:40 +0000 UTC]

...thanks

s'been a depressing day.

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nikeetah In reply to solja2k5 [2006-05-30 00:23:07 +0000 UTC]

sorry to hear that.
hope you feel better

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solja2k5 In reply to nikeetah [2006-05-30 12:45:48 +0000 UTC]

ty.

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