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solja2k5 — Symptoms of Chronic Disbelief
Published: 2005-08-27 18:57:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 198; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Description What happened?
Who rewrote the sequence?
Creating, the Opposite,
Full Spectrum Prerequisite.

What happened?
Who flipped the cards,
Mirroring, Our change of heart?
Who turned the tables? Left me..
Like Samson, so incapable...
Who inverted the code?
Re-reconstructed your soul?

What happened?
A shift in the universe.
Once a blessing, now twice a curse.

What happened?
What happened to the kiss
Flowing sweetly from your lips?
What happened to the face,
and to the sweet embrace?

What happened?
What happened to the kiss
Flowing sweetly from your lips?
What happened to the face...
That Face.

Once a blessing, but now Fallen from Grace.
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Comments: 6

kishz [2006-05-20 04:27:40 +0000 UTC]

The title sets the foundation for your emotions...I like the repition of "What happened?", it blends well with the poem.

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solja2k5 In reply to kishz [2006-05-20 18:20:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. great comment.

I shall take the advice for future work.

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FoxFire318 [2005-08-30 00:37:35 +0000 UTC]

So sad left.... awww >.< I hate it when people make others sad darn it!

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solja2k5 In reply to FoxFire318 [2005-08-30 00:39:53 +0000 UTC]

yea...thats the message for ya...thank you for your comment

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LenInDarkness [2005-08-27 22:20:07 +0000 UTC]

I really like this! really brings back memories for me... good work

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solja2k5 In reply to LenInDarkness [2005-08-27 23:17:45 +0000 UTC]

awwww Thank you Len^____^ heart:

I've got a fan! lol

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