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Solone In reply to bruiser128 [2016-01-06 08:42:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure there was any real change here.  It was more of a reaction shot.  It perhaps made more sense in the original draft when there were simple dialogue subtitles.  I think the idea here was she caught her reflection in the mirror and whispered something like "Awesome!"

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bruiser128 In reply to Solone [2016-01-06 11:15:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh.
What happened to the dialogue anyway?

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Solone In reply to bruiser128 [2016-01-06 11:39:36 +0000 UTC]

I ditched it and decided to keep it a silent movie.  You'd be surprised how much time I can waste and how messy it can get otherwise.  I'm glad I did though, as it left room for the imagination of others.  Namely ldDog77: and his story inspired by this sequence.  Check it out here olddog77.deviantart.com/art/Th…

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bruiser128 In reply to Solone [2016-01-06 12:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I read it already and thought it was pretty good.

Although I find it's easier to creat scene per scene dialogue AFTER creating the scenes.

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