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raiinsoaked [2012-10-06 18:44:28 +0000 UTC]

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Hi~ Alright, I'm not too great on critiquing stuff but here I go, so please take this with a grain of salt. First off, overall its a pretty cute piece. I like how simple the background is, and the colour choices! And your signature is there, but it doesn't really interrupt the piece, as I've seen others do.
Pros:
-varying thickness in lineart is very nice
-shading is not overly simple, nor too obnoxious
-facial proportions

what could be improved:
-tha anatomy is a little off. The neck is a bit thick, and the torso area should have a bit more definition, even if she's wearing a sweater. Also, the hidden arm's elbow is a tad too high >.<;;
-wrinkles in clothing. There should be a bit more, not just a random fold here and there. I had this problem too, as draping clothing on bodies is pretty hard! But there should be less, uh, adhesion to the breasts, if that makes sense xD
-blurring. If you have a smudge/pull tool, use that to make it look a little more like fur.

That's all I have to say! I hope it was fair ;A; You definitely have talent, work hard to keep improving on drawing, you're already good at it and from what I see, you have a lot of potential~!!

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TinyFurrTails [2012-09-23 17:03:48 +0000 UTC]

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There's some great points in this work but there's also a lot of weak points that'll take practice to make stronger. First off let's step into the vision category.
- It's great to see people that interact with the community and do requests, you seem generally happy to do it as well which is encouraging.
- The picture in question does lack some originality though, you kept it nice and clean with basic details, colors that go together, and a nice palette but it's something that's been frequently. If you're confident you should add your artistic signature to the design and create something nobody's seen before!
- Technique is where most of the big problems come into play. You're shading is REALLY adding to the definition of the white. When using white fur like you did it's important to make sure it creates shadoes and smoothly! Which you did for the most part. Note there are a few problem areas in which your shading is uneven. The right leg is a bit more defined in shading then the left which gives it an off kilter look. Secondly her hips are in general off proportioned just the tiniest bit to make her look unbalanced. and finally her paw/chin lack definition. One of the hardest parts with furry art is creating individual toes in a paw which you did leave out and with the chin she dips right into her neck. Don't be afraid to add a little shadow!
- Overall this is an impressive start and a very cute piece e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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TheBlackRose34 [2012-09-23 16:38:44 +0000 UTC]

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This artwork is cute as can be the detail is outstanding in my opinion and I find it very amazing what people like you can come up with please be sure to post more like this because you my friend have a real talent for digital art. If you do not mind me asking. What program did you use to create this outstanding piece of artwork? You don't have to answer I was just curious because I am learning how to draw on my laptop. Anyways keep up the good work I sure wish I was that talented like you.

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XxSilverWebAdoptsxX [2012-10-03 21:29:16 +0000 UTC]

can I get a request

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Hrwolf [2012-09-26 02:15:46 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome cute and sexy x3

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SmileyMonkeyLurvesU [2012-09-23 18:50:46 +0000 UTC]

Ooh yay it's perfect!! I love it so much

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