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SolusFallenwolf — Oh Pilot..
Published: 2013-07-17 07:52:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 212; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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a spark fills the air,an intake, an output,
and then we face the day
Oh pilot of mine life,
grab thy reins,
your time has come again.
sing me songs to carry on,
and chase the sun of the morrow.
bring me hope like grains of sand,
and help me through this bitter end.
release me of my guilt,
fill my head with illusions.
give me a break from being me,
put me to sleep.
on wings so soft,
the clouds would weep,
I give my pilot,
my heart to keep.
keep er safe,
and keep er warm,
help me brave this bitter storm.
one last kiss,
and i'm off to bed.
may angels sleep where I fear to tread.
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Comments: 2
I enjoyed the rhyming flow and loose structure. Feels like a desperate, soul wrenching, whispered prayer to anyone who might listen during that last moment right before sleep finally takes you.
The description tears me asunder. Those four short lines nearly spoke to me more than the many above it. Together, it has painted a powerful image in my mind.
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thank you very much
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