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SonicsChilidog β .:A Dozen Years:. Pg. 63
Published: 2011-08-07 20:53:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 59198; Favourites: 527; Downloads: 121
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And now I have an urge to draw SonEarl husdijkalghsdaoigDialogue (Only Amy Talks-- I'll retype "Amy:" with every new talk bubble):
Amy: Aurgh! Stupid Sonic!
Amy: Always jumping into things without thinking!
Amy: He's so impulsive! I'm not some stupid damsel in distress!
Amy: Now I have to get him out of trouble... again!
Amy: Good thing I know a shortcut!
Amy: Does anyone ever care that I help him?? NOPE!
Amy: All anyone ever cares about is that I got kidnapped. But it's not like Sonic's never gotten himself in a bad situation!
Amy: Heck, he does more than me!
Amy: And if he hurts Earl...
Amy: I'm going to kill him.
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wow usually the girl is like 20 seconds late and the guys alredy dead
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...Not unless Earl kills Sonic first, Amy.
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As sad and dramatic as this is I find it kinda hard to believe that Earl could beat down the hedgehog who fights robot armies on a daily basis. Still really good story though.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!
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NOOOOOOO!!!!! SONIC DON"T DIE..... again......
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seriously sonic could of TOTALLY taken him down.
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breaks window bang bang bang earl:the heck *earl falls down bleeding* mother of pearl
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Looks like Earl beat her to killing him...
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does anyone notice that in the last panel he kinda reminds you of ...... shadow O.o
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SONIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sonic REALLY shouldnt have calmed down.
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So let me get this straight amy dooesnt care what happens to sonic but she cares what happens to earl
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what the heck sonamy is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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FUU.... I WANNA BE IN THE COMIC AND KICK EARLS AZZ SO EFFIUNG HARD
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HES GOT A GGUUN NNOOWW WATTT * seriously i was reading this the suddenly all i c is earl with a gun i was like AHHHH!!!
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I don't understand how Sonic can defeat a million robots...but can't defeat Earl...
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why the hell sonic ...IN A MOMENT LIKE THIS UGGh
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YIKES!! AMY, SAVE SONIC!! NOW!!
EARL! YOU ARE SO DEATH!!
Awesome page! Here comes finally the truth.
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Eggman had it wrong this whole time! He never needed an army of bloodthirsty robots, or the aid of a cosmic horror from beyond space and time! He just need a regular dude with a gun!
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OMFG SONICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCT ^ T*cries hard real*
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wahhh no blood oh well at least there is some action woop and that i thank u heidi
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What is this shit?
Why is there suddenly a lack of agility on sonic the hedgehog, the fastest hedgehog in mobius?
He should be able to punch so fast that every molecule in earlβs body vibrates into gas.
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Well, you could say that same thing to when Shadow defeats Sonic in Shadow the Hedgehog, and how Silver beats Sonic in Next Gen. But both of those times, Sonic actually had room to run and dodge, and he had both of his eyes, and all of his depth perception.
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Uh nope. With shadow and silver, that was after a big tussle, am I right?
So it's obvious that there were reasons.
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Yeah, a big tussle that lasts about 2-5 minutes. And it probably took Amy about 2-5 minutes to get there- so that'd be how long Sonic and Earl were fighting.
And you know, you don't have to read my comic if you hate it so much.
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I'm giving you concrit because I like your art and want you to get better.
Quit thinking I'm insulting you when I simply want you to be a better writer.
It's horribly OOC for sonic to pass out because of pain during a tussle.
He's too persistant and reckless.
I like your posing, your art, and the mushy stuff. But the storytelling is the most important thing in a shipping comic. Without it, the rest crumbles in the eyes of the well-read. That is what I want to teach you. Slow it down. Let things develop. Quit forcing it just because you like a pairing.
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This is a pretty good page, but I noticed your prespective is a little bit off in the last panel.
If Amy is soppose to be behind the two just entering then she should be further back. Make the room look larger so you have more space to work with and make it more dramatic looking, right now it looks like she's just REALLY tiny.
The bottom lines, the one on the right should be longer, that'll give you more room to work with and then all you'd have to do is move her back more and it'd look much more in place C:
I hope I made sense, I could draw out a quick red-line if you don't understand 8D;;
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wait, did Sonic actually get shot!
I thought that was a bruise.
*faint*
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