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old illustration for local car magazine torque, for an article about different modes of transportation (favoring the car of course, given the magazineRelated content
Comments: 7
Asquedraws [2011-03-04 11:17:25 +0000 UTC]
love the concept, but since the aim is in favor of the car mode of transport, doesn't the part about the ERP and jams seem a bit of a downside for all three? just a thought.
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sonny123 In reply to Asquedraws [2011-03-05 06:56:02 +0000 UTC]
heh yeah i remember raising the same issue with the magazine's writer for the story, i guess they wanted to throw in some realistic elements in there too... so long as the driver got to send the girl home at the end!
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The-DaneMen [2011-03-04 07:15:39 +0000 UTC]
I love the panel layout.
It is an area that I need to improve in.
Teach me.
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sonny123 In reply to The-DaneMen [2011-03-05 06:54:48 +0000 UTC]
hmm i guess a couple things to look out for:
1. think of composition across panels (and the page as a whole) rather than just within each panel - watching for how shapes, lines and negative spaces interact on the page as a whole..
2. variety in 'camera' angles and distances - in a very traditional storyboarding manner....
hope that makes sense!
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