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Published: 2010-10-20 13:01:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 3116; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 79
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new web-layout for dotpixels - soon online at dotpixels.deRelated content
Comments: 6
The artwork itself is brilliant. Shiny, well textured, sharp, everything you want in a layout.
There's only two possible changes I could think of.
1. The kerning on the nav buttons is a bit tight, which makes the text look disproportionately small in comparison to the button itself. Maybe increase the letter spacing a tiny bit?
2. You've got a really good illusion of 3D going, from the shadows from the squares on the Top Match section, but the illusion is shattered a bit by the light vertical gradient sitting on top of the navbar. I don't know exactly what to do about it, but those are the two things worth looking into.
Seriously though, if this weren't in the "Critique me" section of the DGUoDA gallery, I wouldn't have noticed a thing. Marvelous work, I'm off to look at the rest of your gallery now!
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thank you so much for this awesome critique!
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No problem at all. I've got 1000 new deviations from DGU, so I figured I should be a good member and start going through them. This caught my eye, to say the least.
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