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soozey — Your Web Remains
Published: 2004-02-16 03:07:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 79; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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My thoughts are always of you.Like a spider web, they are all linked back to one creator.
A new strand appears often.
A new train of thought.
All of you.
I am stuck in your web.
Web of curiousity, knowledge, interest, love and warmth.
My eyes are always smiling -
the spiderweb behind them tickles.
I can feel your venom pumping through my veins.
Pulsating.
My very being is full of you.
Your words,
so powerful.
Your voice,
so angelic.
Your mind,
so intriguing.
Your being,
wrapped around my little world.
My world full of mountains, oceans, plains, streams.
With you, there is always sun.
But when it rains, you protect me.
You put up an umbrella and protect my heart.
A heart who knows pain all too well.
But not when you're around.
Smiles.
Your warmth covers me like a blanket.
A quilt.
One patch for each emotion I feel.
All of these emotions form love.
A love that is strong, protecting, warm and undeniable.
Our bodies are far away.
Mine in my world, away from yours.
But my heart is with you.
No matter where you are.
Your web remains in my head.
My heart.
Close to yours.
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Comments: 17
Love the title.
I really like the duality in the beginning. I got this feeling that love was like a poison, "pumping through my veins". Then it became very loving. I guess love does conquer all.
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yea, on this one, i kinda went off on a tanjent :S
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eee! tis awesome! lol thats exactly why i stay out of relationships. cause sure, they make u feel good, but then sometimes u become lost in ur own little world of love n such and then u cant consentrate....lol ok im done now...i was just thinking about it all..whoooooo
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i know what you mean... thanks
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very creative. i really like imagery and the emotions it shows. i really like this.
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I agree great metaphor...it flows wonderfully. Good Job
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Wow this is so good! I have the same thing about a guy. Mainly because we ahve alot of history. But I know exactly how you feel!
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I was drawn in by the title, I was making a picture with nothing but webs earlier today so I was amused. I love the idea of this.
"Like a spider web, they are all linked back to one creator."
"I can feel your venom pumping through my veins."
Those are some of the best lines as well, but I loved the whole thing all the way through. Great job, + Fave
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Sneaky spider is the one you love. Hehe.
"I can feel your venom pumping through my veins.
Pulsating.
My very being is full of you."
^This is fucking great.
Kind of gives a frightening quality to it....although maybe that is just because I am afraid of spiders...
*hugs stuffed animals*
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thankyou for your insight oh wise one
i'm not overly fond of spiders either... maybe that adds to the poem?
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I think so...it shows how you are feeling about a specific person....scared a little. Or something....ha.
*growls at dogs*
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Wow, excellent imagery and metaphor. The web connections are plain beautiful. Excellent work!
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