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Published: 2016-11-22 18:11:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1275; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 10
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Description Teacher wanted me to cartoon, so I cartooned
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Comments: 28

Kaidir [2016-11-22 18:42:30 +0000 UTC]

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YES, THIS IS TRULY A WONDERFUL PIECE. I DO ENJOY THAT THE CHARACTERS ARE STILL DETAILED WHILE AT THE SAME TIME BEING MORE SIMPLIFIED. I ALSO ENJOY THAT, UNLIKE MOST OF YOUR PIECES, THERE IS A BACKGROUND WITH OBVIOUSLY SOME HARD WORK AND EFFORT PUT INTO IT. I HIGHLY APPRECIATE THAT.

THIS PIECE DOESN'T REALLY SEEM THAT HEAVY-LYING ON THE ORIGINALITY ASPECT, SO I DON'T REALLY KNOW HOW TO RATE IT. THERE ISN'T ANYTHING TO ORIGINAL ABOUT IT, BESIDES THE THINGS FLOATING IN THE AIR. I THINK THAT GIVES IT SOME GOOD BALANCE, BUT IT COULD BE IMPROVED UPON OVERALL.

YOU'RE TECHNIQUE IS ALSO GOOD, AND AS I CAN SEE YOU HAVE TRIES A NEW STYLE YOU WILL NEED SOME TIPS AND TRICKS. I CAN DEFINITELY GIVE YOU THOSE. I'M FAIRLY CERTAIN IT HAS BEEN STATED BEFORE, BUT THE HANDS ARE FAIRLY VARYING WHEN IT COMES TO SIZE AND SHAPE. BUT SOMETHING PEOPLE HAVE NOT MENTIONED IS THE HEAD SHAPE. I FEEL LIKE IT DOESN'T REALLY FIT THE STYLE, AND THE SUFFICIENCY COULD ALSO BE IMPROVED UPON FROM THERE. OTHER THEN THAT, EVERYTHING LOOKS PRISTINE.

I WAS ACTUALLY SURPRISED AND IMPACTED BY THIS WORK HEAVILY, YOU CAN VERY CLEARLY SEE THAT THIS IS A ROMANTIC PIECE AND THAT IT IS A WELL DONE ONE. THERE IS ALSO NO NUDITY, WHICH MAKES THAT EVEN MORE CLEARER. I HIGHLY ENJOYED AGAIN, THE CHANGE OF PACE.

I ADORE SEEING YOU IMPROVE, AND I HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE TO. I THINK THIS WAS A VERY GOOD PIECE, ESPECIALLY FOR SUCH A DIFFERENT STYLE THEN NORMAL.

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SoubiVee In reply to Kaidir [2016-11-23 22:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you!! I will try more styles for sure in the future B) !! It's fun exploring. Β You're so nice to take time to critique my stuff xo I hope you'll critique more in the future!

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Kaidir In reply to SoubiVee [2016-11-23 23:31:15 +0000 UTC]

YES, YOU ARE WELCOME FOR MY FEEDBACK. I ENJOY HELPING PEOPLE LEARN TO IMPROVE THEIR ART, ALONG WITH INTERACT WITH THE COMMUNITY. I AM GLAD THAT YOU HAVE LEARNED FROM MY CRITIQUE.

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Marvyn1990 [2018-03-03 23:17:17 +0000 UTC]

aww so cute!

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TutorialHoarder [2016-11-25 00:30:35 +0000 UTC]

Wha... what? AHAHAH I'M DYING HERE xD
This is priceless

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SoubiVee In reply to TutorialHoarder [2016-11-26 17:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you!

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TutorialHoarder In reply to SoubiVee [2016-11-27 01:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Welcome
Please, do cartoon more often

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SweetlyViolent [2016-11-23 20:37:01 +0000 UTC]

art and beauty right here

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SoubiVee In reply to SweetlyViolent [2016-11-23 22:33:30 +0000 UTC]

a perfect combination of the two B) LOL

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Redtodd1 [2016-11-23 06:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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SoubiVee In reply to Redtodd1 [2016-11-23 14:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Maybe??

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SlaughterCounty [2016-11-23 02:51:06 +0000 UTC]

They're such wonderful dorksΒ Β 

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JacobCosma16 [2016-11-22 23:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww!!!

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Bringmemisery [2016-11-22 22:34:41 +0000 UTC]

THEYRE SO CUTE AAAHHHH

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SoubiVee In reply to Bringmemisery [2016-11-23 15:17:18 +0000 UTC]

THE CUTEST OFCOUPLES

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cinnabunangel [2016-11-22 21:16:11 +0000 UTC]

omfg I'm dying x'DDD
Nat looks so ready to be done with all of this and Dylan is so happy looking, hiding the sin in cinnamon roll haha

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SoubiVee In reply to cinnabunangel [2016-11-23 22:33:54 +0000 UTC]

Hahahah yes xDD Nat is just consistantly done with it all, but at the same time he secretly loves it ya know LOL

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Barnie22 [2016-11-22 19:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Just look at them! Nat's face is brilliant.

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SoubiVee In reply to Barnie22 [2016-11-23 22:34:01 +0000 UTC]

hahaha thank you!

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snayls [2016-11-22 19:06:39 +0000 UTC]

HA! If I ever get a boyfriend and I have a feeling thats how I'll show him around to everyone XDΒ 


"Look at this sap! He picked me!? WOW! *wuv*"Β 

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SoubiVee In reply to snayls [2016-11-23 15:17:05 +0000 UTC]

LOLOL TRUTH

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LysitheaWO [2016-11-22 18:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Omg they look so cute, I love their expression and the rainbow above them xDΒ 
I just think that Nat's right hand is a bit too big compared to his other handΒ 

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SoubiVee In reply to LysitheaWO [2016-11-23 22:37:19 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah I agree with the hand! I got to practice more so I'm less focused on general shapes, and more about detailed anatomy like that!

Thanks!

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Dottea [2016-11-22 18:28:40 +0000 UTC]

holy fuck I love this so muchΒ 

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SoubiVee In reply to Dottea [2016-11-22 22:43:44 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha something a little bit different eh? xDD

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Vioclipse [2016-11-22 18:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Cute!

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SoubiVee In reply to Vioclipse [2016-11-22 22:43:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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mysthetic [2016-11-22 18:12:36 +0000 UTC]

which one's the loser tho

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SoubiVee In reply to mysthetic [2016-11-22 22:43:29 +0000 UTC]

That's for me to know and for you to find out B)

(Surprise, both of them are the losers)

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