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I read the chapter : - ) And it was totally worth the waiting! I can see that you worked really hard on every page! First of all - I like flashbacks : - ) I think, the past of the characters is a very important part of every story. And this flashback is a really impressive way to start the chapter! It is very intriguing!
I like how you made the pages black and grey, so it was clearly seen that those events had taken place in the past. The scenery of the ruined city looks impressive and grim. I like how you drew the buildings, the cracked ground and the clouds of smoke. The perspective is fantastic! I also like the layout of this page, especially the transition from the central to the last panel. It looks like Domino is overlooking the ruined city. This was a great idea for the layout and it really added to the atmosphere!
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Thank you so much for your time in reading it!
I agree, It's one of the best ways to develop a character and to understand them in some way : )
I'm very glad you liked, and I'm very happy to see it was easy to understand that it was an flashback, I was a bit worried if it wasn't so intuitive to see it, most stories leave a narrator voice to tell things like "long ago..." to guide better the reader, but guess I didn't wanted to make it that sudden, changing the color of the pages was an ideia to replace the narrator's voice, i see it worked pretty nice! I'm very happy to see that ^^
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