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Ok pals, it's wrapping-up time. Two more pages to go.
I had a hard time choosing the words in Alice's last bubble. I liked how "kin" sounded to designate youkai in general, but I couldn't quite get a definitive answer on if it was appropriate or not. What do you think?
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Comments: 20
ShadowFrost1 [2012-11-26 22:01:19 +0000 UTC]
No... No... DID SHE TURN INTO A YOUKAI!?
Wait why am I upset? Was it because this is a completely different Marisa now? Like Yurumu's Cirno or the Advent Cirno or the Sakuya-nee? I don't know if this is the best end right now but I hope you continue!
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soumakyo In reply to ShadowFrost1 [2012-11-27 08:09:42 +0000 UTC]
Well Marisa eventually turning into a youkai magician is not so far from the "real" Marisa (if that means anything)
At least it's not going like in Jiroo's version of it ha ha ha =__=
also, I think you did read them, but you know there are two more pages, right?
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ShadowFrost1 In reply to soumakyo [2012-11-27 23:35:39 +0000 UTC]
That's good to hear then!
Yeah, good thing. Jiroo would have a really bitter but slightly sweet ending that seems reasonable enough. I prefer endings that are warm
Done~
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Tres-Iques [2012-10-30 15:33:44 +0000 UTC]
Mon dieu! My mind!
Only two more pages to go, you say? Nooo
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soumakyo In reply to Tres-Iques [2012-10-30 16:00:35 +0000 UTC]
and they're already out, too ! ^^
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soumakyo In reply to Eon-Sonny [2012-10-24 08:32:52 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it was supposed to be "her" panel ^^ (actually I planned to color it with Alice's seven colors, but it didn't mesh very well with the rest)
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launder [2012-10-22 20:57:26 +0000 UTC]
It would be mostly appropriate in general, but it's completely correct for Alce to use since she is a Yokai Magician, and that's really the route that witches go to become Yokai; unless you're making it so that Marisa's rituals did something weird to her, she can only be the same species as Alice.
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soumakyo In reply to launder [2012-10-23 10:34:17 +0000 UTC]
no no, that's exactly it. I was just unsure about "kin" having this kind of meaning at all.
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ninryu [2012-10-22 17:38:27 +0000 UTC]
Wait, Wasn't becoming a youkai magician all about NOT sleeping?
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soumakyo In reply to ninryu [2012-10-22 20:53:20 +0000 UTC]
hmm I guess it was closer to some sort of coma than sleeping
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Ultima-Matrixed [2012-10-22 02:23:07 +0000 UTC]
It's fine, it would be more informal. So it's fine.
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