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Published: 2018-09-23 12:34:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 23671; Favourites: 292; Downloads: 39
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For context this is supposed to take place just after the Kids find out about the Aliens and they each get assigned a guardian.
Features shattered glass Airachnid and Jack.
My main SG comic- > fav.me/dcu2892
Prequel Mini Series -> fav.me/dcxlaj0
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So I finished this thing...
I'm not very happy with it to be honest, but you get to the point where it probably isn't a good idea to keep editing something.
However, this is the first mini-comic I've done that I think is of a suitable quality to upload.
As I'm not the most confident with my writing, I'd appreciate any critiques or advice people might have.
Shattered Glass is the transformers version of the classic Sci Fi mirror-verse trope, where the Decepticons are the good guys fighting against the evil Autobots.
Here's a link to my other shattered glass pictures .
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silverbolt1499 In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-23 23:18:28 +0000 UTC]
glad i aint the only one
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JAXIMUStheFORGOTEN In reply to ??? [2018-09-23 15:16:34 +0000 UTC]
ah my favorite thing, character development.
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SoundBluster In reply to JAXIMUStheFORGOTEN [2018-09-23 16:11:32 +0000 UTC]
XD Thanks!
(or was that sarcasm? )
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JAXIMUStheFORGOTEN In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-23 16:16:36 +0000 UTC]
I was being honest
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JAXIMUStheFORGOTEN In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-23 18:32:28 +0000 UTC]
sorry for the confusion.
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SoundBluster In reply to JAXIMUStheFORGOTEN [2018-09-23 23:18:47 +0000 UTC]
No worries, it's difficult to tell with text only sometimes
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JAXIMUStheFORGOTEN In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-23 23:49:34 +0000 UTC]
And you just summarize my one problem with social media
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JAXIMUStheFORGOTEN In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-24 20:56:22 +0000 UTC]
Sorry I got to real.
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SoundBluster In reply to JAXIMUStheFORGOTEN [2018-09-25 19:23:56 +0000 UTC]
Haha no need to apologize!
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JAXIMUStheFORGOTEN In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-26 21:18:08 +0000 UTC]
I know I was joking.
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ToaNaruto In reply to ??? [2018-09-23 14:51:55 +0000 UTC]
Definitely nice to see Jack again. Really love he and Airachnid bond, considering the latter's reluctance to be near organics.
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SoundBluster In reply to ToaNaruto [2018-09-23 17:40:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! She'll get used to it in time.
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ToaNaruto In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-24 00:34:28 +0000 UTC]
That much is obvious when observing the way that she saved June Darby. So, I've been meaning to ask, how much is Jack's persona different from the canon? 'Casue I can sort of see a bit of canon Miko in him in his desire to be a part of the missions.
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SoundBluster In reply to ToaNaruto [2018-09-24 18:47:48 +0000 UTC]
He's a bit more Miko like, over excitable and prone to rushing in (and getting everyone else into danger....)
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ToaNaruto In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-24 19:37:17 +0000 UTC]
Then does that make Miko the "straight-woman" of the group?
Hopefully Jack's not too impulsive like canon Miko, if you catch my drift.
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SoundBluster In reply to ToaNaruto [2018-09-25 19:31:36 +0000 UTC]
Yes I suppose so.
What hopefully he doesn't get them all trapped in a pocket dimension!
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ToaNaruto In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-26 01:53:19 +0000 UTC]
Well, so long as Jack's track record isn't as big as canon Miko's...and it's not just one character that makes mistakes.
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SoundBluster In reply to ToaNaruto [2018-09-27 20:18:09 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I see what you mean...
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Battledroidunit047 In reply to SoundBluster [2018-10-02 20:29:11 +0000 UTC]
So where does that leave Raf?
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SoundBluster In reply to Battledroidunit047 [2018-10-03 20:55:02 +0000 UTC]
So I think in an SG universe:
Jack would be the hyperactive, act-before-thinking type,
Miko is more reserved interested in her school work (wanting to go on the exchange to Jasper to get away from the busy city life in Tokyo),
Raf comes from a large family but as the elder brother (though he's still only 12) he's used to having to be the responsible one, though he's more interested in sport than his normal-verse counterpart.
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cher123456 In reply to ??? [2018-09-23 14:48:40 +0000 UTC]
Looks like Airachnid is getting a human partner of her own for life when she’s supposed to be hiding in the forest! Awesome comic for a start, buddy! Loved it! Can’t wait to see the next page soon! XD
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SoundBluster In reply to cher123456 [2018-09-23 18:05:05 +0000 UTC]
Haha, yep
Aww thank you!
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cher123456 In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-23 18:19:57 +0000 UTC]
No problem, buddy! Any time! XD
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MysticTopaz04 In reply to ??? [2018-09-23 14:30:00 +0000 UTC]
There’s a few minor spelling errors, but other than that I find absolutely nothing wrong with this and I absolutely goddamn love it. Your writing is very good as well ^^
Seeing Jack and Airachnid in a healthy relationship is kinda weird, but I can’t tell if it’s a good type of weird or just the typical ‘Shattered Glass’ weird. And I still love it.
Airachnid as a motorcycle is kinda off, considering her name means ‘flying spider’ (which honestly sounds fucking terrifying) but I can see why you changed it and it works.
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SoundBluster In reply to MysticTopaz04 [2018-09-23 14:56:32 +0000 UTC]
Oh where? I didn't spot them! Stupid me
Haha, well, I didn't want SG Airachnid to be a creepy stalker-lady!
Yeah, quite a few have said that, I get it It's fanfiction so everyone's going to have their own tastes.
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MysticTopaz04 In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-23 15:18:36 +0000 UTC]
Actually, I think I might’ve miss read something cause I can’t seem to find any now. Sorry 😅
Crazy stalker lady is why I love her in the normal verse, but I still love kind-motherly Shattered Glass Airachnid.
Also I’m just curious, did your version of SG Airachnid have a traumatic experience with an organic that caused her to have a phobia of them or was she just always uncomfortable with them?
I get it ^^ my favourite fictional tastes are space robots, magical stuff, animals that live independently in tribes of sorts, sci-fi, and suspenseful adventure games (that’s how I describe certain horror games that I like)
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SoundBluster In reply to MysticTopaz04 [2018-09-23 18:00:11 +0000 UTC]
Ah, you might have seen the original version I uploaded, zyuna spotted some errors which I corrected.
The Japanese dub of her is even more of a creepy stalker!
The latter, just always uncomfortable, before the war her entire life was spent in Corumkan (the insecticon home-city).
So she had had no experience with aliens, organic or otherwise, combine that with horror tales spread by those who had experience off-world (in particular Blackarachnia) and she would inevitably be wary of fleshlings.
XD Cool!
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MysticTopaz04 In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-23 18:11:33 +0000 UTC]
Maybe XD
Japan disgraces her in the most fucked up anime girl way possible.
Ohh interesting, is Corumkan from the comics or did you just make that up?
Can your SG version of Airachnid control Insecticons?
Little Nightmares is essentially Tim Burton meets video games, all the people, apart from who you play as, have weird proportions and it makes you feel kinda uncomfortable but not too creeped out.
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SoundBluster In reply to MysticTopaz04 [2018-09-23 18:29:45 +0000 UTC]
Haha!
It's kinda sad really I guess they thought it'd make her less scary.
It's in some of the less accessable comics (convention comics etc), though there's only about five sentences about it of tfwiki ->tfwiki.net/wiki/Corumkan
Insecticons have a hive mind, of a sort, with insecticon 'Queens' with more unique robot and alt-modes able to control or at least partially control the drone/swarm insecticons, so it isn't unique to her as Blackarachnia, Kickback, Rampage, Antagony and a number of other named insecticons share the ability.
So its a horror game?
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MysticTopaz04 In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-23 19:48:36 +0000 UTC]
That is one of the few times I haven’t accepted Japan’s weirdness with Transformers.
Ohh I see, so every bug who doesn’t look like Hardshell can play ‘stop hitting yourself’ with an Insecticon XD
The creator prefers suspenseful adventure, but yeah it’s horror game-ish only without the jumpscares, the art of the game is very unique along with the animation (they tried to avoid ‘Pixar’ like animation to not make the characters movement too fluid, it works with the style of the game)
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SoundBluster In reply to MysticTopaz04 [2018-09-23 23:21:42 +0000 UTC]
They made some weird dubbing decisions in prime. The Insecticons chatter all the time too, and Shockwave ends every sentence with "shock"
Haha I guess so!
Ah so it's an uncanny valley horror?
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MysticTopaz04 In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-24 00:27:20 +0000 UTC]
I prefer the weird horse shrieking and Shockwave’s catchphrase being logical
“Stop hitting yourself, stop hitting yourself, stop hitting yourself-“
“With all do respect my Queen please stop,”
“No”
Not so much of a valley, more so floating restaurant prison that’s bigger than a whale, but other wise yes.
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SoundBluster In reply to MysticTopaz04 [2018-09-24 18:52:58 +0000 UTC]
XD Though the skrieking got on my nerves too after a bit....
I meant uncanny valley in terms of the not-quite-right animation
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MysticTopaz04 In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-24 19:29:46 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was funny but I can see how it could annoy for creep someone out.
Ohh I see.
(I was making a joke about the location the game takes place)
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SoundBluster In reply to MysticTopaz04 [2018-09-25 19:32:29 +0000 UTC]
I guess that was the intention
Oh right
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MysticTopaz04 In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-25 20:06:40 +0000 UTC]
I shared the noise with some people at a horse I go to and they thought it was funny, some of the horses looked out of their stalls to see what it was.
^^
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SoundBluster In reply to MysticTopaz04 [2018-09-27 20:26:13 +0000 UTC]
Well most animals don't react well so their own species distress noises. I can see why it got a reaction.
Horses are creepy anyway
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MysticTopaz04 In reply to SoundBluster [2018-09-27 20:32:09 +0000 UTC]
Very true.
I find them to be majestic and powerful animals, but I can see how some might find their size intimidating and nerve wracking along with some other stuff.
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Bakuopp In reply to ??? [2018-09-23 13:41:59 +0000 UTC]
Such a cute mini-comic~! So good! X3
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